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PostSubject: MANIN -Finished!-   Wed Nov 11, 2009 3:25 pm

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Name: Manin
Village: Fire, Grass, Rain, Wind,
Special Traits: Brightly Colored Hair, Generally almost White with hints of Violet, Blue, or Green. Eye Color is Similar. Distinguishing chakra Sensor mark on Face.
Kekkei Genkai:

Genin: 1st phase Activated automatically, no manual. C+ Jutsu Used. 2nd Phase Locked.

Chuunin: 1st Phase Activated Automatically, No Manual, B+ Jutsu Used. 2nd Phase Unlocked.

Jounin+: As written.

1st Phase - The Sensor will glow a light blue color upon activation, this can be manually activated or automatically activated if there is a large amount of Chakra being used. The 1st phase will sense any Chakra usage in the area when activated within a 35 meter zone. This makes it easy to tell if someone is preparing to attack him or the like. The Automatic version works if a lot of Chakra is around him (10 meters) and will inform him immediately (B-A ranked Jutsu). This phase can be deactivated Manually. Note that with Minuscule amounts of chakra [such as E rank] Sensing it would be much harder to notice; it would be almost complete attention on the sensing ability to see something as simple as a Clone if possible at all. [Depends on Chakra-Control], if too much Chakra is used in the Area, there is a potential for a Sense Overload, there would need to be a lot of Charka however.

2nd Phase - The sensor will glow a brighter blue color and expand, taking new shape as it forms around his left eye and ear, it will also grow down to his chin, but not around his mouth. The seal will become more jagged instead of a smooth flowing symbol as well. This phase is activated automatically when a certain nerve is activated in the brain. The nerve is the danger nerve or adrenaline complex, if Balmung is experiencing high amounts of adrenaline then it will activate, there is no manual turn on. Once this is activated, Balmung can see Chakra, but only with his right eye, he can also hear Chakra with his right ear, this makes it easier to protect himself in time for an attack. The field of vision is normal, and the hearing from his left ear is lessened, making him have to rely on his right ear more.

Secret Clan Jutsu: N/A

Clan Information:
-Population- The clan is classified under category E, having very few members ranging only from 20 at all time lows and 160's at all time highs, the current population is about 70 members.

-Profession- Traders, Hunters, Mercenary's, Ninja, farmers and smiths.

-Clan Founder- Kublis Manin [Original] Jin Manin [Proclaimed]

-Clan Training- A Character would learn Jutsu during their Academy stages, and would be told to practice them until they reached Genin rank. Once they have Achieved Genin rank, they may come to a village in which an Elder of the Clan is, and learn from them, when Chuunin or Jounin rank, they go to Kiore, the most powerful ninja in the clan, and learns from her for 2 months, they accumulate many jutsu in this time.

-Clan Politics- The clan has a very Traditional political structure, the oldest of the clan are the leaders, the younger the members the usually less power and less trust in them. They are Tradionalists and attempt to maintain how it always has been.

-Relationship to the Player's Character- Balmung is very close to his clan, his role is a minor Guard duty when he is not in Konoha or doing missions.

-Clan Who's Who-

Jin Manin -> Moved the Clan outside of Konoha to avoid future problems with people inside the village.

Kajiya Manin -> An important Black smith who has made Azure Plate Mail, a very light verision of plate mail with leather connecting parts so that it is silent when walking. It has a bluish color to it, and is known to be light but protective to an extent.

Jiyran Manin -> Kajiya's Partner, forged the 4 Great blades of the Clan. He also developed the Basic Blade of the clan, called the "Oath's Blade"

History:
The Manin clan is a very old clan, one of the oldest in Known existence. They were closely allied with Fire Country in most of the Major battles and wars in the Great Shinobi lands, no one to this day knows how the clan really began. There are myths that Manin clan members were the sons and daughters of gods. They began near Mountain Country, which is why the myth began as such. They quickly moved away from those lands however and settled on the Border of Wind Country and Fire Country. It was unmarked territory, most of the clan resides there. Some 100 Members or so, no more.

They created a village there, the Village of the Sun; a combination of Fire and Wind. It was a neutral village, some members went to Wind country, and some went to Fire. When the 1st Ninja war erupted, they sided with Fire and Wind countries, the second, they did not choose a side since Fire and Wind were warring against each other. The Nations wouldn't allow this, the Villagers noticed that the village was near the border of Grass Country, and decided that's who they were allied to.

The clan was well known for their Kekkai Genkai and brightly colored hair, they were one of the strongest clans and many villages wanted them. The clan became separated rather quickly due to this, sons left home seeking adventure and power, fathers left their wives and children, to become strong only to not return. The few remaining members of the village of the sun were devote family. They would not allow the clan members to leave, only to grass where they would be trained as a ninja and returned to the village or else.


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PostSubject: Re: MANIN -Finished!-   Thu Nov 12, 2009 7:09 pm

Finished.
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PostSubject: Re: MANIN -Finished!-   Thu Nov 12, 2009 7:45 pm

"Once this is activated, Balmung can Chakra, but only with his left eye"

...Typo perhaps?
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PostSubject: Re: MANIN -Finished!-   Thu Nov 12, 2009 7:54 pm

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PostSubject: Re: MANIN -Finished!-   Thu Nov 12, 2009 8:04 pm

TO what extent can he see chakra? And on that note.. how does one... hear chakra?
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PostSubject: Re: MANIN -Finished!-   Thu Nov 12, 2009 8:19 pm

WTFlash wrote:
TO what extent can he see chakra? And on that note.. how does one... hear chakra?

-Not nearly as much as Byakyugan, you would be able to see large amounts, [B Ranked+] ((you would be able to see lower ranks, they just would be very hard to tell what exactly it is)) being used as well as see a person but it does not give you much more then that.

-Hearing, it chakra would sound most likely like water or a whooshing noise when its being used or if the person is nearby, [Within 20 Meters].
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PostSubject: Re: MANIN -Finished!-   Thu Nov 12, 2009 9:49 pm

Uhh... hmm...

Personally I am very strict when it comes to anything involving doujutsu, as the second stage is considered a doujutsu. Its bleeding over into sharigan/hyuuga territory, but has its own twists. In my personal opinion, the ability to sense chakra in use within an area is a KKG in itself and very legit, but when you start stacking it with doujutsu - esk abilities it get kinda... iffy.

Thats why, instead of slicing it up with my otherwise bias ideal I'm going to pass this on to someone else to approve. =)
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PostSubject: Re: MANIN -Finished!-   Fri Nov 13, 2009 12:21 am

Tell 'em to hurry up! I feel naked without color D:
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PostSubject: Re: MANIN -Finished!-   Sun Nov 15, 2009 3:12 pm

I'm a tad bit confused, if you can sense chakra what is the point in being able to hear it as well? It seems pointless from my understanding.

As far as sensing chakra, it's a very powerful ability, but it's do-able. Please add a note about minuscule amounts of chakra though (like E or D Rank) because every sense is unable to pick up some small things, the eyes can't see molecules and the ears can't hear certain frequencies, its the same concept.

Also with this sensing, is it possible to overload, like too much light can blind you, noises that are too loud can defean, etc. The techniques mention every rank but S, so would an S Rank (or too many A Rank) technique used within so many meters damage the chakra sense?

One last thing, where is this ability housed? In the eyes like a Doujutsu, because as Turk mentioned it seems like two different things are happening. Its either a bodily ability or a Doujutsu, one of these can be taken, one can't, pick one please or explain how it works so I can understand it.

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PostSubject: Re: MANIN -Finished!-   Sun Nov 15, 2009 3:43 pm

Kira wrote:
I'm a tad bit confused, if you can sense chakra what is the point in being able to hear it as well? It seems pointless from my understanding.

You see, you can only Sense Chakra in Phase one, and Hear/See Chakra in Phase two.

Kira wrote:
As far as sensing chakra, it's a very powerful ability, but it's do-able. Please add a note about minuscule amounts of chakra though (like E or D Rank) because every sense is unable to pick up some small things, the eyes can't see molecules and the ears can't hear certain frequencies, its the same concept.

I added that it would be hard, but still noticeable if you where paying close attention.

Kira wrote:
Also with this sensing, is it possible to overload, like too much light can blind you, noises that are too loud can defean, etc. The techniques mention every rank but S, so would an S Rank (or too many A Rank) technique used within so many meters damage the chakra sense?

Possibly, but most likely not seeing how most S-ranks or A ranks you would want to be a good deal away from, Plus; The light is just blue [like in the Hyuuga Tech] so i don't believe blinding it would be possible, it would simply take up a larger amount of space, same with Hearing, though it could add a good amount of strain on your brain with all that noise.


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One last thing, where is this ability housed? In the eyes like a Doujutsu, because as Turk mentioned it seems like two different things are happening. Its either a bodily ability or a Doujutsu, one of these can be taken, one can't, pick one please or explain how it works so I can understand it.

The Ability is Housed in the Chakra "Sensor" [For lack of a better name] On the cheek of the face, either Right or Left below the eye. Once the second phase kicks in, the 'sensor' spreads to the eye and ear of the side of the face it is on, disabling the 'sensing' part and replacing it with hearing and seeing.
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PostSubject: Re: MANIN -Finished!-   Sun Nov 15, 2009 3:49 pm

Alright, one last question here, if somebody did a cheek transplant, would the other person be able to use these abilities then?

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PostSubject: Re: MANIN -Finished!-   Sun Nov 15, 2009 3:59 pm

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PostSubject: Re: MANIN -Finished!-   Sun Nov 15, 2009 4:03 pm

Alright, just add a note about potential sense overload and i'll approve it.

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PostSubject: Re: MANIN -Finished!-   Sun Nov 15, 2009 4:07 pm

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PostSubject: Re: MANIN -Finished!-   Sun Nov 15, 2009 4:11 pm

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