Manin, Balmung

Subject: Manin, Balmung Sun Nov 08, 2009 5:31 pm

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Manin, Balmung Jl1pg4

I want to restore this world, But I’m Afraid I can’t do it alone. Perhaps you could give me a hand?

* 'it's society's mask, it's society's way'
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Basic Information:

Name: Manin, Balmung
Nickname: Silver Knight/Balmung of the Azure Sky
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Clan: N/A

* 'and the truth is...it's all a façade!'
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Appearance:

Hair Color: Violet-Blue-White
Eye Color: Violet
Distinguishing Features: Chakra Sensor on right cheek, below eye.

Common Outfit: He wears a simple blue coat which reaches down to about thigh length, it splits at his waist to cover each leg. Its collar is usually popped and has many holes and buckles in the collar in case its cold, allowing him to button it up so it covers most of his lower face. It also has a hood which is simple a blue. It is a long sleeved jacket, but he normally wears it rolled up. He wears long cargo pants that are tan, also full of pockets and a belt that is also tan. He wears simple black socks and white sneakers with three blue stripes along the side, which match his coat's color. He wears two plain silver rings on his left ear and no other jewelry.

Professional Outfit: Steel Plate which covers most of his body, besides his head. He wears a simple purple head-band with no ninja-tag on it, The Rain Village Symbol is instead inscribed onto the back of his armor and on his left thigh protector. He has a small holster capable of carrying a few weapons. He occasionally wears a purple cape that matches the color of his headband.
Specific Articles: n/a

* 'and what's hiding inside....behind all of our fears'
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Personality:

Overview: Balmung believes in chivalry. If there is anything out of the ordinary, he'll question it. He has a hard time trusting people as well, but when his trust has been won, there isn't a person better to rely on. Balmung likes to keep things in order if they are important, but otherwise doesn’t care. He is powerful and competent, especially in the field. He’s quite stubborn and resistant to change, many people see him as headstrong. He’s likely to find himself in a bad spot at times but usually it ends up being a lot of fun. He doesn’t stick to it for very long, if something becomes boring he leaves, simple as that, he is quick at getting something done but can’t stick to something for a long time. At times he is irresponsible which would make many parents untrustworthy of him as a friend of their child, but he usually can keep it together. He tends to act before he thinks but that isn’t in all cases, and he does rely on common sense and his surroundings more than logic or understanding.

He prefers meeting 1 person at a time, but as long as he knows one or two people he can gather up a group of allies pretty quick. He is hard to understand or read, he is very complex. He knows a lot of people and has many acquaintances but usually keeps with his close group of friends before a lot of strangers. If someone is doing something he doesn’t like, he tells them, he isn’t one to bottle up his feelings; this makes him very explosive and easily angered. Even so he knows conflict is a part of any relationship and expects it and tends to give people the benefit of the doubt. His alignment is not to good or evil, nor lawful or chaos, meaning he doesn’t have a true desire to hurt or help people and doesn’t care about laws or breaking them.

Likes:

Calm quiet Atmospheres
Simplicity, complex is not his thing.
Normality,
Being a nobody, he doesn't like having everyone know him.
Nighttime

Dislikes:

Noisy places, too many things going on, etc.
Having to rely on others for his own problems.
He is a very jealous person, and he dislikes that fact about him.
He dislikes change
Being Bored

Philosophy: Balmung is one to Shoot First ask questions later, if he knows someone's a 'bad' guy. He will act on it. He doesn't trust many people and the few he does he cares deeply for, and will fight to the death to protect them. He is mainly influenced by anger, sorrow, and revenge. This can make him explosive and rigid as a person, but also allows him to function better as a Ninja.
Nindo: "There are many sights in the wide world, dear friend, that can not be seen from the shadows.
Many sounds more pleasant than the ring of steel, and many smells preferable to the stench of death."
Friends:
Ryo Hazama
Enemies/Rivals: n/a yet

Rank Information:

Rank: Jounin [Becca Permish]
Village: Grass
Squad: N/A Yet

Special Information:

Strengths:

Strong Willed
Good Strategist
Calm in foreign situations

Weaknesses:

Tunnel Vision, he tends to look at one thing at a time and doesn't open up to several things.
Resistant to Change
Hard to get to Know (Mysterious)

Elemental Affinities: Wind [P], Lightning [S]
Specialties: Taijutsu, Genjutsu

Special Characteristics:
***note, this can only sense chakra that is being used, not Chakra in Humans.***

1st Phase - The Sensor will glow a light blue color upon activation, this can be manually activated or automatically activated if there is a large amount of Chakra being used. The 1st phase will sense any Chakra usage in the area when activated within a 35 meter zone. This makes it easy to tell if someone is preparing to attack him or the like. The Automatic version works if a lot of Chakra is around him (10 meters) and will inform him immediately (B-A ranked Jutsu). This phase can be deactivated Manually.

2nd Phase - The sensor will glow a brighter blue color and expand, taking new shape as it forms around his left eye and ear, it will also grow down to his chin, but not around his mouth. The seal will become more jagged instead of a smooth flowing symbol as well. This phase is activated automatically when a certain nerve is activated in the brain. The nerve is the danger nerve or adrenaline complex, if Balmung is experiencing high amounts of adrenaline then it will activate, there is no manual turn on. Once this is activated, Balmung can Chakra, but only with his left eye, he can also hear Chakra with his left ear, this makes it easier to protect himself in time for an attack. The field of vision is normal, and the hearing from his left ear is lessened, making him have to rely on his right ear more.

Subject: Re: Manin, Balmung Sun Nov 08, 2009 5:54 pm

* 'livin' like a masquerade...actin' a bizarre charade'
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Jutsu:

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Replacement Technique)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: E
Description:
This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise, which Sasuke has done twice in the anime. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.
The anime has a number of other objects being used for this jutsu, such as a boulder, mud, a scarecrow, and even a large rolled-up carpet. These items are usually nowhere in sight, suggesting that they are merely gags meant to lighten up the situation and not an actual part of the jutsu. Additionally, the normal practice of switching places with a section of log is done in several places that have no such thing anywhere nearby.

Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu/Chakra Control
Element: N/A
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed.

Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu/Chakra Control
Element: N/A
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water.

Name: Ayatsuito no Jutsu - String Reeling Technique
Rank: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Ayatsuito no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing wire. This string can be used in rappeling, or as a method to tie down and restrict the movement of an opponent. The Uchiha clan also utilizes the wire in their Sharingan Soufuusha Sannotachi technique. The wire allows the clan member to pin down an opponent, and then unleash a torrent of fire upon them.

Name: Bikou Ninjutsu - Shadowing Stealth Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Bikou Ninjutsu is the technique ninjas use to follow their targets covertly. The manner in which the ninja shadows their target can differ, from the basic hiding under a nearby object, to using a jutsu to turn oneself invisible.

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Nawanuke no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope or wire binds.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu (Body Flicker Technique)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: D
Description:
This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily boost the user's reflexes. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance between the user and their intended destination.

Name: Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
Rank: E
Type: Supplementary
Element: None
Description: This jutsu allows the user to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu

Name: Kanashibari no Jutsu – Temporary Body Paralysis Technique
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kanashibari no Jutsu is an advanced Ninjutsu technique used to temporarily bind an individual or animal. With the person frozen in place, the ninja can either take the opportunity to attack or to retreat

Name: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kage Bunshin is a Jounin level Ninjutsu technique. When Naruto stole the scroll of seals, he learned this technique as well. The normal Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja that lacks any substance. The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. This makes Kage Bunshin an excellent training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and stamina to maintain the Kage Bunshins for an extended period of time. This allows the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train and learn with each clone added. This is especially true when used with Tajuu Kage Bunshin.

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
Rank: E
Type:Supplementary
Element: None
Description: This technique creates intangible clones of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. The illusions can be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement (won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc.).

Name:Kai - Release
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Element: None
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed hand seals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell

Name:Ayame Tori (Murderous Grasp)
Type:Ninjutsu
Rank:A
Element:N/A
Description:This jutsu uses a metal string strengthened with chakra to make a thread capable of cutting through steel with little difficulty.

Name:Meisaigakure no Jutsu (Hiding Camouflage Technique)
Type:Ninjutsu
Rank:A
Element:N/A
Description:This jutsu renders the user invisible. It also masks the user's scent to some degree, making it more difficult to locate them. While normal people can't see through it, those with abilities such as the Sharingan and the Byakugan can. Additionally, creatures with enhanced senses of smell (insects or dogs) can pick up on the user's reduced scent. In the anime, Kabuto has been seen using this technique in the Forest of Death. Quite a few ninja in the filler arcs of the anime also know this technique.

Name: False Place Jutsu
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kokohi no Jutsu is a simple Genjutsu technique which changes the appearance of a nearby object.

Name: Demonic Illusion • Hell Viewing Technique
Rank: D
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that causes its target to see a horrifying vision. The ninja will use the serpent hand seal to cause a circle of leaves to spin and envelop the target and then fall away. Once cast the world will appear normal to the target until they see the illusion.

Name: Ki Explosion
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Element: Wind
Description: Forcing wind Chakra into the User's Fist/Foot/Weapon, they attack the enemy. If they score a successful hit, then the opponent will be pushed back with a fierce wind, enough to blow them several meters back. If used with enough force, it has the potential to break bones without breaking the skin due to the harsh pushing power. This would take a Lot of force however.

Name: Deep Evasion
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This simply increases the user's reflexes for a short amount of time (3 Posts) and cannot be used until 10 posts after the three posts. This is mainly used in concurrence with a speed enhancing jutsu so that the mind can maintain its function at the speeds the user is traveling at.

Name: Sudden Rush
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Element: Wind
Description: The user uses a large amount of wind to blast themselves out of the way of an oncoming attack. This cannot be used for another 4 posts after it is used once.

Name: Dark Strike
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This can be used with a weapon or without, it focuses the user's speed into organized strikes with the ability to dodge any strikes aimed at the user. It starts with a downward slash, the user can then duck, jump, or spin, the user then does a horizontal right to left slash and the user can then roll, dive, tumble, duck or jump, lastly the user slashes upwards and can continue with any movement of their choice.

Name: Bending Reality
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Effect:the target is put into a state that is under the control of the user.
Description: The user must make eye contact with the target to get this to work. This is not a jutsu that is noticed at first but can be started whenever the user pleases. The user puts the target into a state where the objects around them can be changed or manipulated into different things. The user basically controls what the target sees but cannot make objects disappear, such as themselves, until jounin level. The user is able to give nonhuman objects human characteristics. The user is also able to make objects. For example, the user is able to make the target get "attacked" by trees when really nothing happened. The target still can walk around and do things but might see objects that aren't there or might not see objects that are there. This uses a huge amount of chakra unless mastered and cannot be held by a genin for more than 5 posts.

Name: Increase Dodge
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Sub Type: N/A
Chakra Cost: 2
Description: Activating this Jutsu allows the user to slightly Faster then normal, allowing them to dodge Incoming Missiles or Such.

Name: Palm Blast
Rank: D
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu
Element: None
Description: The user released a burst of chakra into both their palms while pushing off with their back foot to rush forward at the opponent, striking them in the upper chest, the concentrated chakra is capable of throwing the opponent off balance, knocking the wind out of them, and breaking ribs. Goes well with inverted strike.

Name: Strike Break
Rank: D
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu
Element: None
Description: The user pivots to the side as their opponent throws an attack, hooking the strike and pulling down with their lower hand, while pushing up and away with the upper hand, this can throw the opponent off balance and send them sprawling to the ground, and can break bones if done quickly enough.

Name: Inverted Strike
Rank: D
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu
Element: None
Description:The user grabs hold of the opponents shoulders then pushes off with both feet, charging the heels with chakra at the same time, the user flips upward, and at the apex of the flip, lets go with the hands and curls the feet in to strike the back of the opponents head with their heel, they then land on the palms of their hands behind the opponent and roll back upright.

Name: Spiraling Whirlwind Kick
Rank: D
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu
Element: None
Description: The user lets one leg go slack, sliding it out from under them, while bringing the other up and around in a quick strike, using the centripetal force to remain off the ground, as the first kick lands, the other leg is brought up for a second kick, this is repeated in a spiraling motion, using the momentum gained from the end of each kick to swing into the next.

Name: Rising Counter Kick
Rank: D
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu
Element: None
Description: The user drops forward, sliding both feet out from under them to avoid an attack; Then rolling their upper torso, 90 degrees to one side, they use a burst of chakra to push the feet off the ground, accelerating the spin, as this happens the user pushes off with their hands and spins both feet around into the opponent.

Name: Dodge Step
Rank: D
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu
Element: None
Description: Used to avoid an incoming strike, the user pivots their body around their upward forward hand and their opponent, using their feet to arc around and swinging their hand back out of the way last, just as the user passes the opponent on their side. This allows the user to easily get behind their opponent.

Name: Burst Kick
Rank: D
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu
Element: None
Description: Used during an attack, the user ducks and blocks the attack with both hands, grabbing onto the opponent and throwing them off balance, then quickly striking upward into the opponent using one of their feet.

Name: Spinning Duel Kick
Rank: D
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu
Element: None
Description: The user spins twice, accelerating their motions as they spin, then on the third rotation, they swing their arms and upper torso down and out, and use the burst of momentum to swing both legs up and around into the opponents head.

Name: Spinning Neck Strike
Rank: C
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu
Element: None
Description: The user grabs hold of the opponents shoulder or upper arm with one hand while flinging themselves around them, spinning the outer arm in as the user rotates behind the opponent to land a hard strike on the back of their neck with their elbow, used properly this can be a killing blow.

Name: Flying Fox
Rank: C
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu
Element: None
Description: The user expends a burst of chakra through their feet, kicking off the ground and flipping over the opponent, while they are above the enemy they grab them by the hair, as they complete the motion, they pull the opponent over backwards by their hair, knocking them down, and in some cases, breaking their neck or cracking their head open.

Name:Rolling Flip
Rank: C
Jutsu Type: taijutsu
Element: None
Description: The user focuses chakra into their hands and feet, pushing off with both and flipping forward, on the palms and balls of the feet, end over end, dodging attacks and closing the gap from an opponent. On the final spring, they push chakra into their hands or feet and push off more, flipping high over the opponent and landing behind them on their feet.

Name: Accelerated Jabs
Rank: C
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu
Element: None
Description: The user focuses chakra into their palm and elbows, accelerating their movements and striking with the heel of the hand in a series of rapid, directed blows to an opponents kidneys, solarplexus, neck, or other soft areas, often used from behind, the attack allows up to ten quick hard jabs, and is capable of taking out multiple opponents if the user is quick and has careful aim.

Name: Fear
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: When this Technique is activated and you look at Balmung at any point in time, Fear will consume you, there will be no changes in reality or the like, just a fear of Balmung that can drive a person to the point of Paranoia and or Insanity if kept looking at him for too long. While a person is looking at Balmung, he will be immobile from fear.

Name: Sorrow
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is done when you look at Balmung, once you do, you will see Balmung begin to cry, if you noticed the tear, this jutsu will take effect. The person who looked at this will be unable to control the urge to cry and sob uncontrollably, this making breathing harder, and you will be practically immobile.

Name: Rage
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is done by looking into Balmung's blue eyes. Once done, Rage and anger will consume you. This clouds the mind of the user simply by giving the user a deep hatred of Balmung, making it almost impossible to see anything but Balmung. Giving the opponent tunnel vision pretty much.

Name:Disgust
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is done simply by looking at any part of Balmung's body. When this has been done, the opponent will have an uncontrollable desire to upchuck [Throw up, Puke.] If they look back up at Balmung before they throw up, they will See something extremely disgusting about him, and then will forcedly throw up. After that the genjutsu is over.

Name: Euphoria
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: B
Element: N/A
Description: This is a genjutsu technique that will begin once you look at Balmung's body. This causes the person who looked at Balmung to feel a happiness unlike any other, a happiness so great its like you are high without the inducing of drugs. This will make you see happy things and completely forget about the task at hand.

Name: Mania
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: B
Element: N/A
Description: This genjutsu takes effect once you look at Balmung's bright hair. This can be just the usual glance, anything and this genjutsu can be activated, normally if you even look at his head this genjutsu can take effect. This genjutsu will make an opponents mind race, usually giving them a serious headache. He usually speaks his thoughts, "what if he comes from over there, or there, or there." Rapid speech is another symtom of this genjutsu, as is hypersexuality.

Name: Estcasy
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: B
Element: N/A
Description: This genjutsu takes effect after you look at the Object Balmung intends to use in the genjutsu. Usually something simple like a stone, once it happens, you will be completely zoned into it, unable to look in any other direction without dispelling the genjutsu, you can still hear and smell and use any other sense, but they won't be able to look in another direction.

Name: Flying Drill Kick
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: B
Element: N/A
Description: The user makes his way towards an opponent at a running speed, then jumps into the air, while spinning to deliver a kick to the opponents face. The jump is at about 3 feet from the opponent, which leaves them little to no time to react making this a potent kick. Once the kick is delivered, it will send the opponent towards the ground face first doing more damage and likely causing them to bounce off the ground due to the force.

Name: Cross Back Kick
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: B
Element: N/A
Description: The user moves to a position in which they can kick the opponent, they draw their leg upwards aiming anywhere from the chest to the head and come in from a horizontal, right to left movement, then draw their leg back as it becomes weighted from gravity to target the opponents kidney's first, then the opponents left leg. Usually causing them to fall to the ground. The first strike is done with the flat top of the user's foot, the second and third with the heel.

Name: Freerunning
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Using Balmung's superior acrobatic and balance, he is able to do some pretty neat stuff. Some basics of this once this jutsu is activated is extreme percision, able to jump from something to another something without falling, another is his ability to balance on the thinnist of objects, more would be balance on his hands instead of his feet, basic acrobatics as well like back flips, front flips, hand springs and jumps, all combined is what gives this jutsu its valued ability.

Name: Thunder Step
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: B
Element: Lightning
Description: Utilizing this technique, it allows the user to move at a faster speed. Much like how when a lotus is opened more speed is achieved, however drawbacks occur. If this technique is used for too long : [3 Posts] The user's speed will lessen to 1/2 for the rest of the fight, if used for over 5 posts, it can cause muscle damage that requires healing. Speed Increases by 25%.

Name: Thundering Axe Kick
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Element: Lightning
Description: This is a basic Taijutsu move where the user raises their foot into the air and slams it down heel first. This causing lightning to shoot up all around the user in a defensive technique to stop any motion of another ninja from hitting him, it is used in a burst. You kick your heel down and the lightning shoots up to stop a person. It is only capable of stopping a ninja, not weapons or jutsu.

Name: Ki Translation
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: B
Element: Lightning
Description: This is much like "Ki Explosion" Technique, this technique however utilizing lightning, the user puts lightning chakra into their palms and strikes at the opponent. If a successful hit is scored, kinetic energy is moved from the palm to the opponent at the force of lightning, causing them to be blown back a large distance.

Name: Blinding Flash
Rank: D
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: While Balmung is wielding his sword, if it is activated and the opponent looks at it, a bright light flashes from it for a moment. Blinding the opponent when it flashes. But only to a person who looks at the card.
RP Sample: Balmung swung his sword as he activated Blinding flash, sending a bright light out at the opponent to stun them temporarily.

Name: Engulfing Darkness
Rank: C
Type:Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: After the opponent looks at this Balmung while this jutsu is activated, the entire area around them[the opponent] will go completely black for 3 seconds. Then it will rapidly go back to reality, allowing for a good distraction.

Name: Refliporical
Rank: B
Type:Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: When an opponent looks at Balmungs Sword or face while activated, they suddenly see themselves running/facing/or walking in the opposite direction of what they really are. This would seriously cripple them in a fight as well as make it almost impossible to fight without dispelling the gen.

Name: Mind Delay
Rank: B
Type:Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: When a kunai is thrown at the opponent when it is activated, the opponent will see everything in a 3 second lagged vision. Therefore if something just happened, the opponent would see it 3 seconds later, the noise is equal to the speed, and this technique lasts until the kunai passes the opponent. Thus making it extremely hard for them to dodge an oncoming weapon, usually this kunai would be thrown, then several other weapons in close proximity to each other at a close range, making for a deadly combo.

Name: Multiplication Disorder
Rank: B
Type:Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: As the opponent looks at Balmung's shield, the shield will begin to multiply rapidly, it will completely surround the opponent then begin to slowly move closer and closer towards him, The Shield will continue to multiply for approximately 2 minutes, but only blocks what is behind it, so anything in front of the Shield can be seen. Balmung usually says something like "Multi-Shield!" To confuse the opponent into thinking its a Ninjutsu.

Name: Memory
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: A
Element: N/A
Description: Once Balmung touches the opponents forehead, they will be placed into a hypnotic like effect, Balmung then can get any information out of them by asking. They will be Unable to lie or even move while this genjutsu is activated, usually for use in interrogations due to the constant pressure that is needed to be kept on the opponents forehead.

Name:Sudden Blast
Type:Taijutsu
Rank:C
Element:Wind
Description:Propels the user in a sporadic manner in a generalized direction. The user has no control over what happens after they leave the ground, the user cannot control their body well while in flight either, it is used primarily as a way to escape.

Name:Weapon Grenade
Type:Ninjutsu
Rank:C
Element:Wind
Description:A thrown weapon is hit with an extreme force of wind shattering it, the shattered pieces act as scrap metal in an explosion shooting out into multiple directions at extreme speeds, this can cause major cutting and damage to anyone within 10 meters of the attack.

Name:Head Breaker
Type:Taijutsu
Rank:B
Element:N/A
Description:This is a pure Taijutsu move, the user forms a fist and strikes downward on the opponent head, causing brain damage and trauma. This injures the user's hand from the punch and it will not be able to be used since the muscle is damaged from the attack, for 7 posts.

Name:Quick Pace
Type:Taijutsu
Rank:B
Element:Wind
Description:Increases the user's movement speed by 15%. Allowing them to hit, run, and strike faster then normal. This in combination with other techniques can be fatal to an opponent and is one of Crim's most powerful jutsu.

Name:Leaf Shadow Dance
Type:Taijutsu
Rank:C
Element:N/A
Description:Kage Buyou is a Taijutsu technique that is used to position a ninja's opponent into a vulnerable aerial position. The ninja will first quickly appear below their opponent, then with a switch upper kick they will launch their target into the air. The ninja will then jump into the air to "shadow" the target with the target's back to their chest.

Name:Shadow Step [Created by Daedalus]
Type:Taijutsu
Rank:B
Element:N/A
Description:This technique is a very unique method of movement. The Dark Step is a high-level assassin skill. It involves moving in a manner that creates the illusion that one is multiplying, and combined with the total absence of noise by buffering it with a decent amount of chakra, makes an attack performed together with this technique hard to counter.

Name:Technique of the Shadow Stalker [Created by Daedalus]
Type:Taijutsu
Rank:A
Element:N/A
Description:Shadow Stalker is a method of movement that involves the ability to read and predict an opponent's movements. Users would utilize this skill to remain on the edge or just outside the target's peripheral vision. They can then either launch a sneak attack, slip by undetected, or terrorize the opponent by becoming visible to them for a moment before slipping back into the shadows.

Name:Shadow Strike
Type:Taijutsu
Rank:B
Element:N/A
Description:Used during a Leaf Shadow taijutsu move, this attack is used. The user forms their fist with their middle finger's joint positioned slightly infront of the other joint's position, this is used to break a bone without the need for a weapon using the Taijutsu user's strength instead of an object.

Subject: Re: Manin, Balmung Sun Nov 08, 2009 5:58 pm

Styles:

Name:Sutansu no Ko: The Fox Stance
Rank: C
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu Sub-style
Element: None
Description: Fox Stance is known for its constantly circular movements, which makes it difficult for opponents to attack directly. The ninja uses their own momentum as a weapon, constantly building up inertia for explosive counterattacks, making it a highly dynamic style. Fox Stance can be used with a variety of elements and weapons, in fact Fox Stance users are known for being able to use anything as a weapon using the principles of their art. When in this stance, the user places their feet fairly close together, with the feet angled outward from their body, allowing for quick spins and kicks. Their hands held out ahead of them with one arm held up to block the head and the other to block the stomach, fingers are kept closed in and curved inward, like a sheathed claw. While not as stable as many other stances it allows the ninja to use their own weight and motion in a highly efficient manor. The user must maintain chakra in their hands, knees and feet. Fox Stance has has excellent excellent speed and defense, good range and endurance, but poor outright attack, relying on their opponents own force to hurt them. The Fox Stance contains an extremely wide variety of techniques, including various strikes (with palm, fist, elbow, fingers etc), low kicks, joint locking techniques, throws, and distinctively evasive circular footwork. fox stance users are known for their ability to "flow" in and out of the way of objects. It requires very little physical strength compared to other stances, relying more on speed, mobility, and the opponents attacks to deal damage. Fox Stance works well with Wind, Electricity, Water, Fire, and Weapons; it does not work well with earth. It is resistant to earth, and weak to fire.

Style Name: Bone Breaker [Hone [Ho-ne] Bura-Ka]
Style Type: Taijutsu
Rank: A [Ranked for the Sheer Destructiveness of this Style]
Style Weapon: N/A
Description: Bone breaker is a series of grapples and grabs, mainly used as a take down, it is based around counter attacks. It is known as the bone breaker due to the many times bones were broken when they fought against a Bone breaker. The Ninja using this style uses their own momentum as a weapon, constantly building up inertia for a very explosive and dynamic style. It has good speed and endurance but is not extremely destructive, it uses the opponents force to injure them. It is used with a variety of attacks, (Grapples, joint locks, kicks, and elbows and knee movements.) Bone breaker requires very little physical strength and is based more around accuracy and speed. Used with certain elements, this Taijutsu can be truly gruesome. Using the ability of counter-attacking, it makes these attacks almost unstoppable
Origin/History: Crim developed this style upon working with Ergo. Ergo taught him many things in order to better himself since Ergo did not want to return to his mask. The style's philosophy is based around Capturing or breaking opponents, making them not want to fight someone. It has a great amount of Intimidation.

Name: Cascading Leg Kick [Kail]
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu is used in preparation of an oncoming attack, once the user sees that the opponent is going to use a Kick, they jump backwards and land on their hands and spring back upwards and send a kick flying downwards at the opponent's Knee, so that the user's Heel meets the opponents Knee thus breaking it inward to destroy the knee.
RP Sample: Crim saw the opponent preparing a Kick, He jumped Sideways landing on his palms just as the kick was delivered, he then pushed off the ground doing a mid-air spin while extending his right leg, to kick at the opponent's Knee. "Kail!" Crim shouted as the kick was delivered a sharp cracking was heard the man screamed in pain as the knee bent inwards.

Name: Shoulder Dislocation Technique [Raij]
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu is used when the user is in a good location, generally standing sideways so that his right arm would meet with the opponents left shoulder. Once in this position the user throws their right elbow downwards on the opponents left shoulder or Left elbow on right shoulder. It is placed directly at the collar bone, thus separating the shoulder from the body, causing extreme pain and the use of the arm would be stopped.
RP Sample: Crim and the opponents fists met, he spun around the opponent, as he turned he delivered his elbow into the opponent's shoulder, "Raij!" Crim shouted as the blow was delivered.

Name: Arm Decapitation Technique
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This technique is used when the opponent throws a punch, the user of the technique would then cross both arms over the opponents arm and bend their body in one direction. This would leave the opponent sprawled on the ground with their elbow bending the opposite direction it normally would. This requires a good amount of strength and is more successful when chakra is applied.
RP Sample: Crim dodged the first punch then crossed his arms to grab the next punch, as the punch was delivered Crim's arms snapped upright and he bent to the right sending the opponent into the air to land on their back, a loud snap was heard half-way through the turn and the opponent Screamed.

Name: Double Decapitation Technique
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This involves extreme accuracy, the user will have to place their blows precisely in order to harness the full effect of this jutsu. The user applies Chakra to their palms and does a hand-spring forward aiming two kicks at both the opponent's knee's, if this strike is successful the opponent's Knee's will bend inwards and the opponent forwards. The user would then utilize both elbows and do an attack to the opponents shoulders or elbows, dislocating or breaking them. If Applied to the elbows of the opponent, it can be used again at the neck of the opponent using the user's fists to break their neck, all in one swift moment.
RP Sample: Crim stood a good distance from his opponent, they used a side-kick and Crim ducked to avoid, he Moved his weight to his hands and kicked forward, knocking the opponents knee's back and causing him to fall forward, then Crim hit both the opponents elbows with his elbows and the opponents neck with his fists, silencing the opponent. For good.

Name: Quadruple Suicide Arm Breaker Technique
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This technique requires a good amount of agility to preform correctly. Once the opponent throws a punch or swings their arm outward, the user will duck/dive to avoid it, grabbing their arm in the mean-while. They move the opposite direction around the body that the arm is meant to, bending it over itself, if preformed correctly, it can break, the shoulder, elbow, and wrist bones in one quick sweep. The user then turns and throws the opponent a good distance. If the user bends the opponents arm in the opposite direction, they will be set up for death, since their other arm will be easy enough to move to punch or stab clear into the user's face.
RP Sample: The opponent swung a sword and Crim Ducked to avoid it, as the opponent began to draw back their weapon, Crim's hands shout out and grabbed the opponents arm in a matter of seconds he bent the arm backwards breaking it and the opponent's sword dropped, Kicking the sword away it flew through the air and landed Sword point up in the dirt. He continued to bend the opponents arm back breaking the shoulder and wrist in almost perfect symphony. He spun his body as he did this and released once all three bones were broken, sending the opponent flying, landing on the sword, heart through it.

Name: Bone Crush Technique
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user kicks the opponent in the Knee area, thus sending them forward, sometimes breaking the knee entirely and forcefully sending them forward. As the opponent falls forward, the user grabs the back of the opponents head, cups it and smashes it into his or her Knee, effectively killing them.
RP Sample: Crim Dodged an oncoming blow then Kicked the opponent in the Knee, sending them forward, he grabbed the back of their head and held his knee up, smashing their head right into it.

Weaponry:

x10 Kunai - Carried in Kunai Pouch
x10 Shuriken - Carried in Separate Shuriken Pouch
x20 Senbon - Carried in a slot on his coat
x2 100 Foot Wire Rools - Carried in his pants big pockets
x10 Exploding Tags - Carried within his Kunai pouch
---Weapons above, only available while in Normal Clothing, not while wearing armor---

x1 Reel of Wire
x10 Kunai - Carried in Kunai Pouch
x1 Blade - Carried on Back
x1 Shield [3 foot diameter, Wooden]- Carried on Back beneath Blade
---Weapons available at all times---

Name: Spring Loaded Blade
Appearance: These hidden blades appear to be simple arm guards, which can be carried on the user's forearms or back if not needed for battle. When they are clicked, they are about 1 foot long and 3 inches wide, for the frontward blade, the side blades are about 6 inches long and 1 inch in width.
Rank: D
Special Abilities: These hidden blades appear to be simple arm guards, which can be carried on the user's forearms or back if not needed for battle. When unused, the blades fold over each other. When used, the user must click his forearms together, were a special key and lock mechanism unlocks both blades. Then, they spring out in about 2 seconds and lock into places, when the user's arms are re-clicked, they unlock and the user can slide the blades back into their hidden slot, where the user can hide the blades again.
Origin: These along with some other equipment were given to him as a congratulations from his father. After he passed his Academy Exam, he returned home to tell his mother and father, whom were very pleased to see him and extremely excited to hear that he had passed his exam. His father gave him these since they proved useful to him when he was in his ninja days, he told him to pass them down to his son or daughter when she achieved the rank of genin, Balmung gladly accepted the gifts.
***note, under sleeves while non-armor, under bracers while armored***

Name: Azure Plate
Appearance: It is a silver plate mail which covers his entire except his head, it is elegantly painted and colored and fits him perfectly. It is rounded off so that the edges cannot cut him in half or decapitate him or cause cutting or bruising, it is rounded off by a thin leather layer.
Rank: D
Special Abilities: This armour is kept within a summoning scroll which allows him to summon it whenever needed. It can stop light type weapons, [Kunai, shuriken, senbon] rendering them ineffective. Any other weapons however will pierce or slash through. It is only plate armor, there is no underlying armor beneath it making it significantly lighter, It is simply like a heavy coat.
Origin: These along with some other equipment were given to him as a congratulations from his mother, After he passed his Academy Exam, he returned home to tell his mother and father, whom were very pleased to see him and extremely excited to hear that he had passed his exam. His mother gave him this piece of armor inside a summoning scroll and instructed him that it was hers when she was younger so he should take it now, since he was bigger then her, it needed some adjustments and so he was able to wear it perfectly. She told him to carry it with him always, a shield to protect him when the days grew darker.

Subject: Re: Manin, Balmung Sun Nov 08, 2009 6:04 pm

* 'is our true self....locked inside the façade!'
{. the history .}

History:

mother: Hirizu Manin
father: Tobuken Manin
siblings:
Sisters: -
Brothers: -

Pre-Academy Arc:
Tobuken and Hirizu, were of an odd couple, Hirizu's parents did not approve of Tobuken as a husband, but Hirizu happened to like Tobuken, so they left Konoha, where their parents lived and fled to the Town under the Sun, a small outlying village near the border of Suna's territory. They were married there, in a sort of Romeo and Juliet manner. They had a son, Balmung they named it. He grew up in the Village of the Sun, and when it was time for him to head to the Academy, he left. Though his father and mother recognized the way he walked, talked and looked like them, they dyed his hair a startch violet white color. They changed the way he dressed to a more formal way, and made him talk to everyone like they were a superior. After that, he was off to the academy.

He had to travel by horse drawn carriage on a supply wagon, it was the only way out of the village under the Sun, and the only way in, since nothing of value was found in the village under the sun. And so he had to travel on the back of a wagon, feet dangling below him with a bit of money and food on his back to pay for an apartment while he was residing in Grass.

Academy Student Arc:
His Academy days were normal, he started his days in Grass by laying out the city, exploring everywhere so he knew where to go if he needed food, missions, etc. And exploring was something he enjoyed. After he was situated which took maybe a week or so, he joined the Academy, and was instructed that classes would begin a month and so from the day he visited. In the meantime, he spent what time he could watching ninja, reading books, or doing any other kind of thing that would teach him about being a ninja before actually becoming one.

Soon enough, the Academy started, he dearly missed his parents and his fellow villagers but he decided it was best he just stay in Grass, doing what he could. He would have no knowledge if his parents were alive, dead or gone. It ate him up inside, but he lived with it. He trained hard, it was one of the few things he could keep himself occupied with, he was not one to stick to one thing, he liked doing many other things, and in the new environment of Grass he had so many things to do. But that was slowly changing, he was becoming more secluded and more isolated, preferring to be with himself then with others, by the time the Academy was over, he was on the verge of becoming a mute.

Genin Arc:
Balmung was a very secluded genin, one of the first few weeks he had become a genin, he was kidnapped as a Missing Ninja disguised as an ANBU member. He met the organization known as the Akatsuki, and a couple of its members but no more then that. He was lugged around like extra baggage for a reason he didn't know. Eventually the leader, Dutchie Lomana decided to return him and another Genin named Kija to the village in order to achieve Chuunin rank. While he was away, he managed to pick up several fighting styles in a local dojo in Waterfall Village. After he had been returned to the leaf Village, Dutchie and Kija secretly killed the Hokage, killing Kija in the process and Dutchie managed to escape.

Balmung was lucky enough to escape from some ANBU members who gladly helped him. Glad to see him back in the village in one piece unlike the other genin. Balmung met a ninja who appeared Jounin rank named Hitomi, who said she would train him in his years to come to make him one of the most powerful ninja in existance. He is untrustwory of her, yet she has applyed for Kusrikage and is intended to become the next one, which makes him slightly more worried, and also happy that he will personally be able to train with the Kursikage.

Chuunin:
Balmung began his training with the Kursikage and became strong, he was sent on many missions. He quickly learned how this worked. He knew from the moment he was taken in by the Kursikage that he was 'special' to say the least. He began to learn some pretty powerful techniques. During his years as A chuunin he met Ryo Hazama, Balmung was interested with the guys Kekkai Genkai, and the two quickly became friends, one of the few People Balmung would ever Trust with his life, and he believes that Ryo can feel the same way.

His major and final Mission as a Chuunin was to kill a good amount of Missing ninja. He was instructed to kill at least 5 without help of others, or wait until the Jounin exams would be held. Balmung was not one to be patient and wait unless it seriously benefited him. In this case it didn't, so he set off and for 2 months of Coming and going out of Grass, he would Kill Missing Ninja, with little to no help from anyone, besides the occasional rumor or whisper. The job was finished however. And he returned to the Grass Village. The Kursikage was both surprised and pleased, he was given an examination, a ninja prisoner, ranked A, would be pitted against him. If he were to get close to losing, the prisoner would be stopped and Balmung would not achieve the Jounin rank. He succeeded in this fight, and he was proudly awarded the Jounin rank.

Jounin:
Balmung achieved Jounin rank at the Age of 17. 11 Days before his birthday. He has trained a good amount but still does not have many A-ranked Jutsu or a single S ranked, he relies mainly on strategy almost completely using several well placed B and C ranks opposed to A ranks. He yearns to have more power in his pocket but he really doesn't have a clue to who to go to so he tends to stick to his guns and just rough it out with his B ranks. He intends to Take on a team soon, as well as be a major asset to the Grass Village in upcoming times now that he is a Jounin.

Role Play Sample:
Ah, moon country, a nice pleasant country with no ninja or anything of the like around that could cause anyone harm. One couldn't ask for a nicer day either, sun shining, wind blowing a cool and calm breeze off the sea, clear sky with no signs of rain, waves calmly lapping against the shore, but it was not for the day that Drizzt was here, in fact he was sleeping during the day in a home of some older folk whom he did not know, on a makeshift cot of piled goods and blankets. By the time night fell, Drizzt was wide awake. He cracked a few joints in his neck, stretched his legs and gathered his things. After throwing his cloak on he left the room and continued on out of the home into the darkened streets, cloak covering his head and some of his face. No one to hunt yet.. what will i do. he thought to himself continuing down the street in the pitch black seeing perfectly, spotting a bar he decided to enter, maybe i'll hear something interesting. he thought smiling to himself as he made his way to the bar, upon entering he sat down at a table near the wall, and took off his hood, "Get me a beer." he told a server politely as he could with those words.

When the server returned, he took a sip of it and eyed over the crowd, looking for an interesting conversation, he spotted a small group of people conversing near the fire, he picked up his drink and moved over there, clapped one of the men on the back, "May I have a seat?" Drizzt asked with a smile on his face, the man looked somewhat bewildered as he looked at Drizzt, "S-sure." he said shaking his head, "I didn't think i drunk that much yet.." the man mumbled to himself so no one could hear, Drizzt smiled and sat down, "And then she slipped! Fell all the way down the set of stairs right on top of old gizmo!" The man burst with laughter, Drizzt smiled, wondering what exactly they were talking about and simply took another sip of his beer. He set it aside, and looked around, a strange man with an axe walked in, he ignored him for the time being and listened to the men talk, laughing with them, sighing with them, whatever they did he mimicked.

Always keeping his eye on the people around the room however, listening for anything more interesting. He heard something but didn't know what to make of it. "They say it was Omir..." someone said he couldn't tell where from though, it was in a dreaded tone, Omir. he took a mental note and continued talking amongst the men. "So where you from Stranger?" one of the men asked him, "Oh, the mountains." Drizzt responded cordially, the men laughed, "Sure are a lot of those around, what you pop out of a Rock?"One of the men said, They laughed harder at that, Drizzt even chuckled a little, "No, they are near Lightning country, the biggest Mountain Range in the world many say." The men nodded, "Ah." one of the men however shook his head and stood up about to leave.

Subject: Re: Manin, Balmung Sun Nov 08, 2009 9:22 pm

Whoo! Finished

Should take a good amount of time to check, so take your time folks.

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Ki Explosion - I can't see a technique like this cutting.

Im not so sure about your special characteristic because it involves many aspects not specific to your character. The first is it's sensory qualities, the second is the fact that it is a seal (hinting at fuuinjutsu) and the third is that it has qualities of seeing and hearing chakra, which are exclusives to clans. It does seem more like a clan trait then a special characteristic, and the fact that it involves seals and stages make it very iffy. Requested that it be editted.

Shadow Wound - as long as chakra is involved, it cannot be 'invisible'

Spiracle Mastery - would be greater then 'D' rank for sure. At least 'A' rank, and here is why;

To contain chakra outside of the body is extremely difficult, especially without a medium in which to do so. As shown by the Rasengan, it is only possible because the spiral put on the chakra contains it into a sphere like shape, keeping it together. To have spheres of charkra, created and maintained AND manipulated outside of the body without a medium for a long period of time, would take extraordinary chakra control; let alone three of them.

Spiracle Cannon would thus be difficult to pull off as well... and seeing as though they are both ninjutsu, and you lack the ninjutsu specialty, you most likely wouldn't be able to use them.

Shadow Step - refers to itself as 'dark step' also, to move 'without noise' would require chakra to buffer/muffle the sound, like a suppressor.

With all he is carrying, he is going to be really weighted down...

Subject: Re: Manin, Balmung Wed Nov 11, 2009 11:48 am

WTFlash wrote:: Ki Explosion - I can't see a technique like this cutting.

How so? Wind = Makes it Cut, So Wind Chakra Applied to Fist = Makes your fist cut? Its not enough to cut an arm off but it'll give you a good scratch.

WTFlash wrote:: Im not so sure about your special characteristic because it involves many aspects not specific to your character. The first is it's sensory qualities, the second is the fact that it is a seal (hinting at fuuinjutsu) and the third is that it has qualities of seeing and hearing chakra, which are exclusives to clans. It does seem more like a clan trait then a special characteristic, and the fact that it involves seals and stages make it very iffy. Requested that it be editted.

Forgot to edit this on Word, its actually not a seal. Its specifically a Chakra Sensor.

WTFlash wrote:: Shadow Wound - as long as chakra is involved, it cannot be 'invisible'

-Why?

WTFlash wrote:: Spiracle Mastery - would be greater then 'D' rank for sure. At least 'A' rank, and here is why;

To contain chakra outside of the body is extremely difficult, especially without a medium in which to do so. As shown by the Rasengan, it is only possible because the spiral put on the chakra contains it into a sphere like shape, keeping it together. To have spheres of charkra, created and maintained AND manipulated outside of the body without a medium for a long period of time, would take extraordinary chakra control; let alone three of them.

Spiracle Cannon would thus be difficult to pull off as well... and seeing as though they are both ninjutsu, and you lack the ninjutsu specialty, you most likely wouldn't be able to use them.

Forgot about that, once again mistake in Word. Removed these.

WTFlash wrote:: Shadow Step - refers to itself as 'dark step' also, to move 'without noise' would require chakra to buffer/muffle the sound, like a suppressor.

Hello? Ninja's in Real Life Razz

They are silent.

WTFlash wrote:: With all he is carrying, he is going to be really weighted down...

He doesn't carry all of that 100% of the time, I mark this to ensure that i don't use more then say 10 kunai cuz its unrealistic to say : Holy crap he just threw 500 Kunai! =O!!

He usually carries about 1/2 of those supplies unless he brings a satchel or whatnot.

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-The cutting effect is usually done via a medium, like the chakra knives. Wind allows you to cut, but just having wind chakra present does warrent a cutting effect, it would have to be focused into some sort of external blade to do so which is a completely different effect from a taijutsu wind attack that is originally described as 'pushing'.

-A chakra sensor? I dont understand how this is a special characteristic. If it was some sort of technology or scanner or something like that then it would be a weapon, if it were a seal then it would be some sort of fuuinjutsu. I dont think this 'chakra sensors' falls under the category of 'special characteristic'.

- Because chakra outside of the body is visible

- Haha, well i've never heard a silent ninja, so I Wouldn't know Wink

- I was just making a note that you gots alot of stuffs. lol

Subject: Re: Manin, Balmung Wed Nov 11, 2009 1:35 pm

WTFlash wrote:: -The cutting effect is usually done via a medium, like the chakra knives. Wind allows you to cut, but just having wind chakra present does warrent a cutting effect, it would have to be focused into some sort of external blade to do so which is a completely different effect from a taijutsu wind attack that is originally described as 'pushing'.

Edited.

WTFlash wrote:: -A chakra sensor? I dont understand how this is a special characteristic. If it was some sort of technology or scanner or something like that then it would be a weapon, if it were a seal then it would be some sort of fuuinjutsu. I dont think this 'chakra sensors' falls under the category of 'special characteristic'.

Its a special characteristic because its not technology or fuuinjutsu... thus making it special..? =P

WTFlash wrote:: - Because chakra outside of the body is visible

Always? I Have seen no proof in either way.

WTFlash wrote:: - Haha, well i've never heard a silent ninja, so I Wouldn't know

Exactly +3

WTFlash wrote:: - I was just making a note that you gots alot of stuffs. lol

I see

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-Haha, its more like a clan ability to be honest.

-Two examples are the Rasengan, which is pure chakra shaping, and the Azuma's chakra knives. Both of which use chakra in a raw form and both of which are visible. One chakra is used in the physical realm, it becomes visible, as it interacts with light.

-lol, jokes aside, when you move, you make noise. The only way to avoid making noise is by having something act as though it were a buffer or suppressor. It is possible for chakra to act as that buffer, but no one can simply move without making noise, as moving generates vibrations, those vibrations hit the ear where they are translated into sound. One must muffle the vibrations of moving in order to avoid generating sound in order to become 'silent'.

Subject: Re: Manin, Balmung Wed Nov 11, 2009 3:09 pm

WTFlash wrote:: -Haha, its more like a clan ability to be honest.

You would put me through the trouble of making a whole clan -_- i'll make it soon.

WTFlash wrote:: -Two examples are the Rasengan, which is pure chakra shaping, and the Azuma's chakra knives. Both of which use chakra in a raw form and both of which are visible. One chakra is used in the physical realm, it becomes visible, as it interacts with light.

Yeah, but nothing in the show says it cant be invisible? So..?

WTFlash wrote:: -
-lol, jokes aside, when you move, you make noise. The only way to avoid making noise is by having something act as though it were a buffer or suppressor. It is possible for chakra to act as that buffer, but no one can simply move without making noise, as moving generates vibrations, those vibrations hit the ear where they are translated into sound. One must muffle the vibrations of moving in order to avoid generating sound in order to become 'silent'.

fixed.

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Haha I assumed that you were trying to avoid making a clan, but clan abilities and 'special characteristics' are not interchangeable. Get clackin' on that history buddy, hehe.

The only way it could be invisible is if it was A. too small to actaully see or in particles that were too small to be picked up, in which case it would be able to cut, or B. if you had a way to reflect/bend light around the chakra. Keep in mind that we go by a system of 'knowns' not manipulating unknowns. By saying "nothing in the show says it can't be invisible" is a flawed logic because there are plenty of things that would be ridiculous to allow that 'the show doesn't say' about. Anything that is invisible is considered questionable, ESPECIALLY tangible/physical objects, because once we allow invisible objects or attacks, then we are opening up to a realm of techniques and weapons that cannot be predicted against via sight, and thus considered 'unblockable' by normal standards. As you can imagine, that opens a whole pandoras box of issues involving what sense can and cannot sense what and claims of god modding and so on and so forth. Thus completely masking a single sense is very restrictive by my understanding of the standards of the site. Is that a good enough explanation?

Subject: Re: Manin, Balmung Thu Nov 12, 2009 7:12 pm

WTFlash wrote:: Haha I assumed that you were trying to avoid making a clan, but clan abilities and 'special characteristics' are not interchangeable. Get clackin' on that history buddy, hehe.

Finished Clan.

WTFlash wrote:: The only way it could be invisible is if it was A. too small to actaully see or in particles that were too small to be picked up, in which case it would be able to cut, or B. if you had a way to reflect/bend light around the chakra. Keep in mind that we go by a system of 'knowns' not manipulating unknowns. By saying "nothing in the show says it can't be invisible" is a flawed logic because there are plenty of things that would be ridiculous to allow that 'the show doesn't say' about. Anything that is invisible is considered questionable, ESPECIALLY tangible/physical objects, because once we allow invisible objects or attacks, then we are opening up to a realm of techniques and weapons that cannot be predicted against via sight, and thus considered 'unblockable' by normal standards. As you can imagine, that opens a whole pandoras box of issues involving what sense can and cannot sense what and claims of god modding and so on and so forth. Thus completely masking a single sense is very restrictive by my understanding of the standards of the site. Is that a good enough explanation?

No. =]

Jk =PPP

Removed.

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Quote :: Name:Jutsu Sho (Technique Neutralize)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank:A
Element:N/A
Description:This jutsu cancels or impedes the occurring of the opponent's technique. It uses the same amount of chakra as the jutsu it intends to cancel.

Definitely cannot allow this. Remove, please.

Quote :: Name: Dark Strike
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This can be used with a weapon or without, it focuses the user's speed into organized strikes with the ability to dodge any strikes aimed at the user. It starts with a downward slash, the user can then duck, jump, or spin, the user then does a horizontal right to left slash and the user can then roll, dive, tumble, duck or jump, lastly the user slashes upwards and can continue with any movement of their choice.

This sounds an awful lot like Kenjutsu. Please edit the description so that it is clearly just taijutsu.

Quote :: Name: Bending Reality
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Effect:the target is put into a state that is under the control of the user.
Description: The user must make eye contact with the target to get this to work. This is not a jutsu that is noticed at first but can be started whenever the user pleases. The user puts the target into a state where the objects around them can be changed or manipulated into different things. The user basically controls what the target sees but cannot make objects disappear, such as themselves, until jounin level. The user is able to give nonhuman objects human characteristics. The user is also able to make objects. For example, the user is able to make the target get "attacked" by trees when really nothing happened. The target still can walk around and do things but might see objects that aren't there or might not see objects that are there. This uses a huge amount of chakra unless mastered and cannot be held by a genin for more than 5 posts.

This should be at least B ranked.

Quote :: Name: Flying Fox
Rank: C
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu
Element: None
Description: The user expends a burst of chakra through their feet, kicking off the ground and flipping over the opponent, while they are above the enemy they grab them by the hair, as they complete the motion, they pull the opponent over backwards by their hair, knocking them down, and in some cases, breaking their neck or cracking their head open.

It seems strange to point this out, but what if you opponent has too little hair to do this with? Wouldn't it be better to grab their head?

Quote :: Name: Thunder Step
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: B
Element: Lightning
Description: Utilizing this technique, it allows the user to move at a faster speed. Much like how when a lotus is opened more speed is achieved, however drawbacks occur. If this technique is used for too long : [3 Posts] The user's speed will lessen to 1/2 for the rest of the fight, if used for over 5 posts, it can cause muscle damage that requires healing.

Exactly how much faster are we talking here? Please include that detail in your description.

Quote :: Name: Deep Evasion
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This simply increases the user's reflexes for a short amount of time (3 Posts) and cannot be used until 10 posts after the three posts. This is mainly used in concurrence with a speed enhancing jutsu so that the mind can maintain its function at the speeds the user is traveling at.

Name: Dark Strike
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This can be used with a weapon or without, it focuses the user's speed into organized strikes with the ability to dodge any strikes aimed at the user. It starts with a downward slash, the user can then duck, jump, or spin, the user then does a horizontal right to left slash and the user can then roll, dive, tumble, duck or jump, lastly the user slashes upwards and can continue with any movement of their choice.

You've posted these twice, remove one instance of each please.

Subject: Re: Manin, Balmung Fri Nov 13, 2009 12:27 am

~Fox~ wrote:

Quote :: Name:Jutsu Sho (Technique Neutralize)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank:A
Element:N/A
Description:This jutsu cancels or impedes the occurring of the opponent's technique. It uses the same amount of chakra as the jutsu it intends to cancel.

Definitely cannot allow this. Remove, please.

This is a Canon Technique

~Fox~ wrote:

Quote :: Name: Dark Strike
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This can be used with a weapon or without, it focuses the user's speed into organized strikes with the ability to dodge any strikes aimed at the user. It starts with a downward slash, the user can then duck, jump, or spin, the user then does a horizontal right to left slash and the user can then roll, dive, tumble, duck or jump, lastly the user slashes upwards and can continue with any movement of their choice.

This sounds an awful lot like Kenjutsu. Please edit the description so that it is clearly just taijutsu.

Its not Kenjutsu if it doesn't involve a large sword, which it doesn't, because i don't have a large sword.

~Fox~ wrote:

Quote :: Name: Bending Reality
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Effect:the target is put into a state that is under the control of the user.
Description: The user must make eye contact with the target to get this to work. This is not a jutsu that is noticed at first but can be started whenever the user pleases. The user puts the target into a state where the objects around them can be changed or manipulated into different things. The user basically controls what the target sees but cannot make objects disappear, such as themselves, until jounin level. The user is able to give nonhuman objects human characteristics. The user is also able to make objects. For example, the user is able to make the target get "attacked" by trees when really nothing happened. The target still can walk around and do things but might see objects that aren't there or might not see objects that are there. This uses a huge amount of chakra unless mastered and cannot be held by a genin for more than 5 posts.

This should be at least B ranked.

'This uses a huge amount of chakra unless mastered and cannot be held by a genin for more than 5 posts" Chuunin -> 7 Tops? Its not likes going to matter. Once your in a Genjutsu the battle is won.

~Fox~ wrote:

Quote :: Name: Flying Fox
Rank: C
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu
Element: None
Description: The user expends a burst of chakra through their feet, kicking off the ground and flipping over the opponent, while they are above the enemy they grab them by the hair, as they complete the motion, they pull the opponent over backwards by their hair, knocking them down, and in some cases, breaking their neck or cracking their head open.

It seems strange to point this out, but what if you opponent has too little hair to do this with? Wouldn't it be better to grab their head?

Easier to say Hair, if they didn't have enough then the head is implied, pretty simple stuff. I feel like I'm being treated like I'm Five right about now.

~Fox~ wrote:

Quote :: Name: Thunder Step
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: B
Element: Lightning
Description: Utilizing this technique, it allows the user to move at a faster speed. Much like how when a lotus is opened more speed is achieved, however drawbacks occur. If this technique is used for too long : [3 Posts] The user's speed will lessen to 1/2 for the rest of the fight, if used for over 5 posts, it can cause muscle damage that requires healing.

Exactly how much faster are we talking here? Please include that detail in your description.

Fixed

~Fox~ wrote:

Quote :: Name: Deep Evasion
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This simply increases the user's reflexes for a short amount of time (3 Posts) and cannot be used until 10 posts after the three posts. This is mainly used in concurrence with a speed enhancing jutsu so that the mind can maintain its function at the speeds the user is traveling at.

Name: Dark Strike
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This can be used with a weapon or without, it focuses the user's speed into organized strikes with the ability to dodge any strikes aimed at the user. It starts with a downward slash, the user can then duck, jump, or spin, the user then does a horizontal right to left slash and the user can then roll, dive, tumble, duck or jump, lastly the user slashes upwards and can continue with any movement of their choice.

You've posted these twice, remove one instance of each please.

Done.

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Quote :: This is a Canon Technique

First, we don't always allow canon techniques. It depends on the tech itself. Secondly, all official canon techniques are found on THIS site. I cannot find "Jutsu Sho" on here. Have a look, by all means, but it is not a registered canon technique if it is not on there.

Quote :: Its not Kenjutsu if it doesn't involve a large sword, which it doesn't, because i don't have a large sword.

Kenjutsu is swordplay, size doesn't come into it. If it is significantly small, it is no longer a sword. You mention blades, and the description sounds like it was created as either a Weaponry or Kenjutsu type. Please edit so that it fits the Taijutsu type it has been given.

Quote :: 'This uses a huge amount of chakra unless mastered and cannot be held by a genin for more than 5 posts" Chuunin -> 7 Tops? Its not likes going to matter. Once your in a Genjutsu the battle is won.

I don't quite get what you're saying here, but you've clarified my point for me. "This uses a huge amount of chakra unless mastered and cannot be held by a genin for more than 5 posts." Something of this complexity is not C-ranked. It's effect is also significant enough to earn B-rank.

Quote :: Easier to say Hair, if they didn't have enough then the head is implied, pretty simple stuff. I feel like I'm being treated like I'm Five right about now.

Sure, your tech - you call it. I thought it'd be easier to say 'head', because then there would never be situation requiring something else to be 'implied'. Like I said, it's your tech, have it however you want. Though I object to that last comment, I was merely offering friendly advice on your technique.

Subject: Re: Manin, Balmung Fri Nov 13, 2009 5:28 pm

~Fox~ wrote:: First, we don't always allow canon techniques. It depends on the tech itself. Secondly, all official canon techniques are found on THIS site. I cannot find "Jutsu Sho" on here. Have a look, by all means, but it is not a registered canon technique if it is not on there.

Could have said it Nicer. Hurtin' mah Feelin's here.

Removed it. Someone Must have lied to me and I'll have to beat his butt for it.

~Fox~ wrote:: Kenjutsu is swordplay, size doesn't come into it. If it is significantly small, it is no longer a sword. You mention blades, and the description sounds like it was created as either a Weaponry or Kenjutsu type. Please edit so that it fits the Taijutsu type it has been given.

Correct. And I am Not using any sword play, I am Using my Advanced Taijutsu skill WITH the use of a sword to allow this jutsu to work, it can work with or without a sword. Just because something involves a sword, doesn't make it Kenjutsu, Swordplay vs Swinging a Sword like a Baseball bat, two different things. Sure I'm swinging it like a baseball bat in an organized and efficient way, but still, like a baseball bat.

~Fox~ wrote:: I don't quite get what you're saying here, but you've clarified my point for me. "This uses a huge amount of chakra unless mastered and cannot be held by a genin for more than 5 posts." Something of this complexity is not C-ranked. It's effect is also significant enough to earn B-rank.

Fixed Simply because I'm tired of listening to this argument, even though This has been approved several times, Even By You, [Might I add] On other sites with the rank of C.

~Fox~ wrote:: Sure, your tech - you call it. I thought it'd be easier to say 'head', because then there would never be situation requiring something else to be 'implied'. Like I said, it's your tech, have it however you want. Though I object to that last comment, I was merely offering friendly advice on your technique.

If you want it to sound friendly, then you really shouldn't talk down to me like you have been in your previous posts. [If i may so Add] Even if you didn't mean to, because it sounded like it to me, Just my opinion, no hard Feelings. Mk? <3

Age : 35 Posts : 58 Location : UK. Join date : 2009-10-31

Quote :: Could have said it Nicer. Hurtin' mah Feelin's here.

Removed it. Someone Must have lied to me and I'll have to beat his butt for it.

Heh, I fell for it before, don't sweat it.

Quote :: Correct. And I am Not using any sword play, I am Using my Advanced Taijutsu skill WITH the use of a sword to allow this jutsu to work, it can work with or without a sword. Just because something involves a sword, doesn't make it Kenjutsu, Swordplay vs Swinging a Sword like a Baseball bat, two different things. Sure I'm swinging it like a baseball bat in an organized and efficient way, but still, like a baseball bat.

M'kay, it's a fair point so I'll pass over this jutsu.

Quote :: Fixed Simply because I'm tired of listening to this argument, even though This has been approved several times, Even By You, [Might I add] On other sites with the rank of C.

Really? Well I apologize for inconsistency, but we all strive to better ourselves, eh?

Quote :: If you want it to sound friendly, then you really shouldn't talk down to me like you have been in your previous posts. [If i may so Add] Even if you didn't mean to, because it sounded like it to me, Just my opinion, no hard Feelings. Mk? <3

You're entitled to your opinion, fair enough. If the comments weren't rude though (and they weren't), by default you could assume it is meant in a friendly manner - a postive outlook and all that jazz. Besides, I can check an application so much quicker if I'm not writing twice as much just to make sure the author feel better about it all.

But all that aside, I can no longer find fault with this application. APPROVED.

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