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| Subject: Rain Shinobi [Completed For Approval] Tue Dec 15, 2009 8:38 pm | |
| Basic Information: Name: Lamalu "Gawjo" Kaguya Nickname: Gawjo Age: 15 Gender: Male Clan: Kaguya Appearance: Hair Color: Black Eye Color: Brown Distinguishing Features: Two identical round red circles on center of his back and A large noticeable Afro Common Outfit: Charcoal Black Coat. Baby Blue Scarf. Full White T-Shirt. Sagging Black Denim Jeans. All Black High Top Kicks. Priceless Small White Diamond Earring. [left ear] Professional Outfit: Regular Plain White T. Black with White Stripped Baggy Sweat Pants. Dark Gray Sandals. Specific Articles: n/a Overview: Lamalu as a swagger , cocky attitude.He feels that world is all against him.Lamalu knows that he must work for what he wants and needs, since things aren't just granted towards him.On the other hand Lamalu may seen from a perspective's eye a troublesome child but, once you get to know him, he's a down to earth fellow.Lamalu is a very intelligent young man but, gets side track from the negative.He as another side in which he may think of another human beings life before his own delicate life.Relationship wise Lamalu is a hit and quit sorta guy.He feels this way since he believes he might get hurt morally from the one he loves.Always looking for that special someone in his timeless life.Overall Lamalu is pretty much a ball of different aspects and personalities in which he views the world. Likes: *Hot Chicks *Understandable People *Peace and Quiet *Showing Off *Tasty Foods *New Opportunities *Comedy *Friendship Dislikes: *Annoying People *Arrogance *Selfish Attitudes *Rudeness *Awkward Situations *Fake Personalities and People *Lying Philosophy: Brush The Past Away and Look For a Better Day. Lamalu views the world as a unbalanced system. But one day Lamalu sees the world destroying their conflicts and grudges and working together to accomplish better things. Lamalu always would want to leave his days on the world with a great satisfaction of what he accomplished. Nindo: "Do It, Just To Do It" Friends: [None] Enemies/Rivals: [None] Clan Details: Name: Kaguya Village: Mist Special Traits: Bone Regrowth:All Kaguya are able to regrow any removed, damaged, or broken bones in their body within seconds. They are not hindered in any way by jutsu that work on destroying their bones, since they simply regenerate. This enables them to use a majority of their jutsu. Pain Tolerance:Kaguya are fully susceptible to pain, but since their natural abilities cause them great pain, they become accustomed to it as they grow as ninja. Kaguya are able to ignore any pain caused by their own clan jutsu, though they are not immune to pain caused by other jutsu or effects. Steel Bones:All Kaguya bones are a tough as steel, making them much stronger than normal bones and thus, more effective when used in jutsu and also more resistant to breaking and damage. Jutsu that would normally damage bones are not effective against Kaguya bones unless they are of incredible strength that could logically harm steel. Kekkei Genkai: Bone Corpse Pathway Secret Clan Jutsu:Name: Finger Bullets Rank: D Type: Taijutsu Element: None Description: A Kaguya, using their bloodline abilities, will use their fingers to fire their distal phalange bones as bullets. As the bones fly through the air, they will rotate and drill into their target once they make contact. Name: Bone Spikes Rank: C Type: Taijutsu Element: None Description: A Kaguya, using their bloodline abilities, is able to alter their bone structure in order to produce bones with a sharp edge. These can be pushed out of the body from various points to make a defensive structure, or to make bladed bone weapons. History: Shikotsu Myaku is the blood inheritance limit of the Kaguya Clan. The Kaguya clan hailed from the Water Country and they were known for their love of battle. They foolishly decided to challenge their home country and they were all wiped out save for Kimimaro. This clan has the ability to manipulate their bone structure. They can remove their bones at will to create weapons as strong as steel and also use their ability to spurn the creation of new bones. Clan Symbol: Rank Information: Rank: Genin Village: - Formerly In Mist Country - Resides In Rain Country Squad: [None] Special Information: Strengths: Cracking Safety Locks , Quick Thinker, Ability Of Annoyance, Stay Clam In Stressed Situations Weaknesses: Long Periods Of Concentrating, Getting Up On Time, Fallowing Directions, Studying Paper Work, Easily Ticked Off Elemental Affinities: Suiton Special Characteristics: n/a Specialties: Ninjutsu and Genjutsu Jutsu: Basic Fundamental Jutsus- Spoiler:
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse
Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
Name: Explosion Tag: Activate Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.
Name: Kai - Release Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique Rank: D Element: N/A Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.
Name: Gansaku Suterusu no Jutsu - Fake Stealth Technique Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: This technique is used to hide the actual location of the user. By placing a piece of cloth or other personal belonging a distance away, the user can then hide while it appears to the enemy that the user has hid near the personal item. By imbuing this item with chakra, it may cause a small glint or flash to attract attention from foes.
Name: Koe no Mozouhin - Voice Imitation Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: The user uses chakra to alter his larynx and vocal tract to change the way his voice sounds. This can be used to make the user sound like an animal, an adult, of the opposite sex, etc. This ability requires neither chakra nor hand seals.
Name: Kusai - Stinking Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: A technique similar to the Utsusemi no Jutsu [Projection Technique]. This time, the user takes there smell and relocates it else where. This can be used to confuse animals, or those whom specialize in smelling.
Name: Utsusemi no Jutsu - Projection Technique Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: In order to hide their location and not disclose their position, the user projects their voice by resonating everything they say from all possible directions with this jutsu.
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: C Type: General Skill Element: N/A Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water
Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing Rank: C Type: General Skill Element: N/A Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed.
Suiton- Spoiler:
Name: Water Release: Violent Water Wave Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Suiton Description: Water gushes out from the mouth like a waterfall and washes away the enemy. One can freely control the power of this technique with the amount chakra one releases.
Name: Water Clone Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Suiton Description: The Water Clone Technique like other solid clone techniques, the clones can be used to perform tasks the user is unable or unwilling to do for themselves. The range of the clone is limited however, as it can not travel very far from the original body. Additionally, water clones only have one-tenth of the original person's power.
Name: Mizuame Nabara - Starch Syrup Capture Field Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Water Description: Suiton Mizuame Nabara is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, the shinobi will expel a sticky liquid from his gullet. This liquid can cover approximately 20 square meters. If the target runs on top of the liquid, their feet will become glued to its sticky surface. If the ninja focuses chakra to their feet before touching the surface, they can hover above and move over it without hindrance. Genjutsu- Spoiler:
Name: Kokohi no Jutsu - False Place Technique Rank: D Type: Genjutsu Element: --- Description: Kokohi no Jutsu is a simple Genjutsu technique which changes the appearance of a nearby object.
Name: Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu - Mist Servant Technique Rank: C Type: Genjutsu Element: --- Description: Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that creates up 5 false attackers to delay and confuse the enemy. Though these servants are not real, the actual ninja is able to remain hidden and throw kunai and shuriken matching the movements of the servants. This makes it appear the false servants are capable of attacking. When the enemy attempts to attack the servant, they will merely disrupt the servant’s illusion body, usually causing them to multiply.
Martial Styles: N/A
Weaponry: Weapon Case Stores: 25x Senbon - Spoiler:
25x Shurikens - Spoiler:
15x Kunais - Spoiler:
10x Exploding Notes - Spoiler:
Standard Wire - Spoiler:
Mirror - Spoiler:
Official Village Headband - Spoiler:
Pre-Academy Arc:- Spoiler:
Lamalu grew up in a poor household. His father was a drunk, and so was his mother. His father came home drunk and beat Lamalu. His mother let him. This happened on a daily basis from the age of three. He was lucky to survive. It had been driving him into insanity. His thoughts were all over the place. He learned the true meaning of fear and pain. His father broke his nose, his bones, his heart. There was one beating that was the most memerable. Lamalu had been siting on the floor. His mother was yelling at him again. She yelled at him because they had no money. His father got home while she was ranting on and on.
"You making your mother yell, boy? Haven't I taught you not to do that?" His words were slurred. He knew what was to come. He ran. His father chased him. Using his small size and his father's drunkedness to his advantage, he ducked under every attempted grab. He ran in and out of rooms. He tried with all of his might to avoid being captured. But then he tripped. It was all it took for his father to catch him. While the son lay in the fetile position, the father beat his child's face in. He hammered away, landing haymaker after haymaker. When he could not hit his face, he landed body blows. After 15 agonizing minutes, the beating stopped.
Lamalu slowly stood up. He could feel two ribs broken. His nose was broken, and he had cuts all along his face. He was losing blood. Slowly getting to his feet, he walked to the bathroom. Pulling out the needed tools, he stopped the bleeding. He starilized the wounds and stitched them. He pushed the cartilage in his nose back into place, and fresh blood gushed out. He stopped the bleeding in his nose. He wrapped bandages around his torso. He had done all of this before, but not all at once. This is most likely what sent him over the edge. Academy Student Arc: - Spoiler:
He went to the academy. There, he learned Ninjutsu and basic Genjutsu. He learned chakra control. He learned to control his thoughts. Every day he learned something new and compulsively trained to better it. He dared not use it against his father because he knew that he wasn't ready for what would come after if he failed to kill him with the first shot. He breezed through the academy with the mindset of never stopping.
The most memorable day was his first. He was skittish. He stayed away from human contact, human voices. If someone approached, he dodged out of their way as if his life depended on it. His sensei noticed this behavior. At the end of the day, when everybody was leaving, Lamalu stayed behind to let all others go ahead of him. As he started to leave, his sensei called him over to his desk. He stayed a safe distance from the desk.
"Lamalu, is something wrong? Is something happening at home that I should know about?" Lamalu was shocked. "Um...uu....n-no sir." "Are you sure? If something is wrong, you can tell me. I am a friend after all." This shocked Lamalu even more, but it gave him a strange sensation. "Um...no sir." "Ok...tell me if you change your mind." A smile spread across the sensei's face. "You may leave if you like." "Thank you sir." As Lamalu left the classroom, he felt a sensation that was awkward to him. Compassion.
One day, his father came home, drunk. When he went to smack Lamalu for not saying hi, Lamalu blocked and kicked him in the no-man's-land. It was a hard kick. It killed his father. His mother was devastated about the whole situation since she didn't have her husband anymore to make any income for the family not, because of his death.
Selfish as Lamalu mother was, she made him go find a job throughout the village.Because of the young boy's age it was hard for him to find a job. Since no one wanted a young-ling to accompany with their local business and they thought it was bad luck for them.The Rain Country economic market was really slim. They relied on major nations for money problems. In order to but food on the table for him and his lonesome mother, Lamalu had think of a different method of making easy currency.
Lamalu came up with the idea of hustling on the mean, troublesome streets of the village.The less fortune boy would secretly steal valuable items from local stores and sell them doubled price in mostly dark alleys in the village.Being just an Academy Student, Lamalu couldn't get the chance to revive mission and get payed for successfully completing one, so hustling was the only options for now.
Threw the long criminal periods of Lamalu young life, he was to afford food for his mother and nice clothes for himself also.His mom would occasionally ask her son on how he gather so much money, but Lamalu would always tell a story just to protect his mother form the truth.Still attending the local academy, Lamalu would still try to squeeze his priceless hours of studying and training to perfect his skills as a shinobi to become a official Genin.
To Be Continued....
Role-Playing Demonstration: The blade flashed through the air as it threatened to cleave him into two. I'm going to die soon if I keep this up! He's barely missing me! He jumped ready to prepare another jutsu but the masked man was on him in moments. Swing his deadly axe trying to end this fight quickly. Kazura ducked as the blade swept through the air past his hair. And there he saw an opening. He swung his foot low and caught the assassin in the legs. The man fell to floor as his legs were swept from under him. Wasting no time at all, he pulled a Kunai from his pouch and jumped into the air determined to become the winner, with his Kunai held high for the kill. The man was not finished to Naga's great dismay. The assassin rolled away as Naga impaled the ground. The man swung his axe towards Naga's face. The man was like 5 feet away but the blade of the axe grazed his face cutting along his cheek. Naga Kazura cursed as he jumped back. The flipped off the ground and smirked. "I'm going to kill you!" Naga spat as he began a series of hand-signs and shouted, "Suiton, Mizurappa (Water Release, Violent Water Wave)." Naga held his right hand up to his mouth. Suddenly a jet of water erupted from his mouth and skyrocketed towards an unsuspecting assassin. The blast hit him full in the chest where it sent him reeling backwards 6 yards. The blast should of knocked him senseless. But it seemed that he had much charisma of some sort. "Damn assassins. Where do you guys come from these days." Naga walked up to the man who was struggling to get back up. The Kazura whacked him on the side of the temple where he was knocked unconscious. "Time to take you to the police squad.
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| Subject: Re: Rain Shinobi [Completed For Approval] Wed Dec 16, 2009 11:16 pm | |
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- Name: Dance of the Clematis Vine (Tessenka no Mai Tsuru)
Rank:B (will only use later until improve in rank) Type:Kekkei Genkai and (Taijutsu) Element:Hone Chakra Cost:10 Description:The Kaguya Clan using their kekkei genkai, they can can modify and pull out his own spinal column to use as a flexible chain staff, regrowing a new spine to replace the removed one. The protrusions on the vertebra are modified to make them stronger and sharper
Name: Dance of the Seedling Fern (Sawarabi no Mai) Rank:S (will only use later until improve in rank) Type:Kekkei Genkai and (Ninjutsu) Element:Hone Chakra Cost:22 Description:The Kaguya Clan's final dance (presumably the strongest as a last resort), this jutsu causes a giant forest of bone spikes to burst from the ground.The user is able to emerge from any bone at will, giving him a deadly element of surprise should the opponent be able to avoid the attack. 'Cause you can't use these yet, just remove them and train them at a later date. - Quote :
- Elemental Affinities: Suiton and Fūton
Genin can only have one element. Remove one of these and the techniques of the removed element. - Quote :
- Name: Chakra Kenpa no Ame - Chakra Detecting Rain
Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Suiton Description: This Ninjutsu technique allows the user to blanket a wide area with a downpour of rain. They can maintain a connection to the rain and tell when someone is obstructing it, making it an excellent location technique. The user can even detect the individual’s chakra level and skill. If you choose to keep Suiton element, this is an A-rank technique and will have to be removed whichever element you choose. - Quote :
- Name: Kazekiri - Wind Cutter
Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Futon Description: This technique is used to divide and neutralize a Wind attack launched against the user. Using their ability to manipulate Wind, the user will split the incoming Wind attack and make it harmless. Can attempt to dispel any wind attack regardless of rank. If you choose to keep Fuuton element, this will need edits. At C-rank, this should only dispel Fuuton techniques of C-rank or below. | |
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| Subject: Re: Rain Shinobi [Completed For Approval] Wed Dec 16, 2009 11:39 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: Rain Shinobi [Completed For Approval] Wed Dec 16, 2009 11:44 pm | |
| Just remove Fuuton from your elemental affinities and you're good to go. | |
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| Subject: Re: Rain Shinobi [Completed For Approval] Wed Dec 16, 2009 11:47 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: Rain Shinobi [Completed For Approval] Wed Dec 16, 2009 11:50 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: Rain Shinobi [Completed For Approval] Wed Dec 16, 2009 11:54 pm | |
| Oh hello, didn't see that there. Apologies Hage, still making the transition between Ingoo rules and these. Yeah, J, you'll need to do what he asks. | |
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| Subject: Re: Rain Shinobi [Completed For Approval] Thu Dec 17, 2009 12:04 am | |
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| Subject: Re: Rain Shinobi [Completed For Approval] Sat Dec 19, 2009 12:49 pm | |
| Stamina and Chakra Control would be Special Characteristics, strengths are things that arent directly influential to combat ability, like being good at drawing or having a natural talent to write things down quickly. | |
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| Subject: Re: Rain Shinobi [Completed For Approval] Sat Dec 19, 2009 11:15 pm | |
| Yes, though you will need to explain how you excellent stamina, why, and define it in a solid paragraph. | |
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| Subject: Re: Rain Shinobi [Completed For Approval] Sun Dec 20, 2009 12:09 am | |
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| Subject: Re: Rain Shinobi [Completed For Approval] Sun Dec 20, 2009 5:36 pm | |
| You describe your clothing, but not your actual character, you may either provide a picture of some sort for the site or you should provide a physical description. | |
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| Subject: Re: Rain Shinobi [Completed For Approval] Sun Dec 20, 2009 8:33 pm | |
| Alright, looks fine, approved. | |
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