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 Malice Ongaku (Luna Bard) (APPROVED:X)

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PostSubject: Malice Ongaku (Luna Bard) (APPROVED:X)   Sun Nov 01, 2009 10:38 pm

Basic Information:

Name: Malice Ongaku
Nickname: Luna
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Clan: Oni Ongaku

Appearance:

Hair Color: Navy Blue (Depends on lighting)
Eye Color: Mystic Blue
Distinguishing Features: Malice has glyphs scripted along his arms under his gloves.

Common Outfit: Malice's outfit is a blue tunic that runs deep in his families heritage. The tunic is very simplistic, although it does have many hidden talents. It looks slightly worn along with his ragged black cape. Malice's hat has his families symbol on it and it jagged on one end to give it a rural look. On the end of Malice's gloves, are ovular crystal that he uses for fel energy. Although some may consider it feminine, Malice wears earrings that he changes depending on his mood. Malice four quivers at all time, two on his back and one on each leg. Malice’s bow is usually slung over his back unless he has it drawn.



Professional Outfit: ^
Specific Articles: Crystals on gloves, earrings.

Personality:


Overview: Malice has never felt or thought of being angry. Such emotions never cross his mind. He's always bright yet distant from the task at hand. Whenever confronted with a challenge or problem, he thinks it over before doing anything. He never overthinks but has a tendency of being extremely lucky. Malice doesn't have an interest in other people's problems and would rather not hear about his comrades lives. Malice will usually be found contemplating and thanking lady luck for his fortune.
Likes: Music Instruments Poetry Nature
Dislikes: Pollution Waste Conflicts Filth
Philosophy: Malice views the world as one big masterpiece, one that he plans on conducting through everything he does.
Nindo: To make the music of life a masterpiece.
Friends:
Enemies/Rivals:

Clan Details:

Name: Oni Ongaku
Village: Unknown
Special Traits:

Chakra Demons: All Oni Ongakue (or OO) are able to form their chakra out of their bodies, as early as age 5, and make them into a solid form. This solid form may take on whatever form the user pleases, though certain limits on size, power, and quantity exist, according to the chart below:

Maximum Rank: The maximum rank of your Chakra Demon(s), at any time the OO may choose to divide this among multiple Chakra Demons, lowering the rank by 1 for two demons, and 2 for three demons. Meaning an S Rank OO could have 1 S Rank, 2 A, or 3 B.

Maximum Size: The maximum dimensions, both height and width wise, of your Chakra Demon. Number of Jutsu: The maximum number of jutsu each Chakra Demon may know, each jutsu is assigned to a certain tune the user plays while controlling the demons. A Chakra Demon cannot use jutsu that are a higher rank than it is, and each time it uses a jutsu, the chakra cost is taken from the OO.

Rank of UserMaximum RankMaximum SizeNumber of Jutsu
DD1ft.1
CC3ft.3
BB5ft.5
AA8ft.7
SS12ft.10

Musical Control: All of an OO's Chakra Demons are manipulated through music, formed from a single designated instrument that the OO possesses. If the instrument is damaged so that it can no longer create a sound, then the OO loses control over their Chakra Demons. Controlling the demons is done via musical types, tempo, style, or even the actual song. The same movement is assigned to the same type of music, and cannot be changed mid-combat, though it can be changed outside combat.

Kekkei Genkai: None
Secret Clan Jutsu: None
History: Unknown
Clan Symbol: Unknown


Name: Pang
Gender: None
Age: N/A
Appearance:
Pang is a small sand worm about 1 ft in length. His skin is a hazy shade of gray and he lacks eyes like any chakra demon. Pang's mouth is circular and can stretch to about twice it's size. His teeth are lined all around his mouth with two sets of jaw like teeth on each side used for attaching himself to objects.
( Much smaller then this, as in he doesn't eat cars ._.)

Personality: Pang doesn't speak to other people, half because he lacks the vocal cords to do so and half because he's timid. Whenever he wants to say something he asked that Malice says it for him. He is very kind and considerate, which is about the opposite of his outwards appearance.

Rank: C
Natural Abilities: When Pang digs into the ground he activates his natural vibration sensors. Pang can accuratly tell where someone is on the surface by feeling the vibrations they make on the ground. He can send this information back to Malice by using his own small vibrations. Pang is also a masterful digger ( Being a sand worm) and can burrow extremely fast.

Special Abilities: N/A

Story:
Pang met Malice when Malice was 5 years old and started having visions of him. A few months later, Pang had gathered enough energy to become a separate body from Malice and take the form of a chakra demon.
Slot: N/A

Rank Information:


Rank: C-rank
Village: Grass Village
Squad: -

Special Information:

Strengths:
Planning
Motivation through musical talent
Collective thought

Weaknesses:
Following rules
Denial
Unneeded Drama

Elemental Affinities: Doton
Specialties: Renjustu, Ninjutsu

Special Characteristics:
Sound Location:
Although Malice's hearing is not enhanced, his ability to track it to it's origin is. Through his training with music, Malice knows everything about it and can pin point a noises location as soon as he hears it.


Jutsu:


D- Rank:
Spoiler:
 


C-Rank

Spoiler:
 





Martial Styles:


Name: Musical Ranger
Emphasis: Ranged Weapons
Requirements: Attunement with the music of life.
Description: Someone that has mastered the musical ranger has complete knowledge of the world and every noise it can make. The chirping of birds, the whistling of trees, and the crunch of snow are just examples of the tunes of nature that a Musical Ranger knows and loves. When they shoot or throw a ranged weapon, their strength and dexterity are magnified depending on their rank and level of natural knowledge.

Natural Jutsu:

Name: Sound Camouflage
Rank: C-B
Type:N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This is a passive ability that camouflages the user’s sound by spreading the sound out out and making it seem like it's coming from another origin. At C-Rank, the user can make the sound originate from a spot atleast 50 ft. in diameter around them. At B-rank, the user can pick up to 3 origins.

Name: Note Camouflage
Rank: C
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This ability allows the user to change any sound they make blend in with the noises of their surrounding by making them act in harmony. For example, the user shoots an arrow, and at the same time a bird chirps. This camouflages the sound of the arrow and makes it impossible to hear without an enhanced hearing ability.

Name: Natural Camouflage
Rank: C-S
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This ability allows the user to blend into nature. This isn’t exactly a ‘special’ ability, since it only consists of covering themselves with leaves or snow to hide themselves. This hides them considerable well and the users get better at it the higher rank they are.
C-Rank: Knows how to cover in one environment and gets a 15% camo bonus.
B-Rank: 2 environments 30%
A-Rank: 3 Environments 40%
S-Rank: 4 environments 50%


Name: Range Expertise
Rank: C-S
Type:N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This is a passive ability that increase the users ability with ranged weaponry by an amount dependant on their rank. The three things that are increased are strength, dexterity, and speed. Strength is the power the arrow is shot, Dexterity is the aim and skill of the shot and Speed is how fast the shot is.
C-Rank: Str:+10% Dex:+10% Spd:+10%
B-Rank: Str:+20% Dex:+20% Spd:+20%
A-Rank: Str:+30% Dex:+30% Spd:+30%
S-Rank: Str:+50% Dex:+50% Spd.+50%


Specialty Jutsu: None Yet

History:
Once Malice started his ninja training, he soon found that he could put his musical talents to help with his stealth work. He was a master of both and soon found that he could not only hide body in the grassy fields surrounding the village, but he could also cover his sounds by using natures noises as camouflage.

This led him to create a style that only he knows, a style that can help him hide in any natural environment and snipe his opponents. Malice knew that this wouldn’t help him in urban environments, but he didn’t mind. The moors were his home.


Weaponry:


100 senbon, 15ft. of wire, a small handheld mirror, a ninja headband and 10 explosive notes.


Name: Lute X-bows
Quantity: Two
Rank: C
Physical Description: Malice's lute crossbows are a combination of a musical instrument and a lethal one handed crossbow. Malice keeps these in a scroll whenever he isn't using them. Besides having more torgue and strength then a regular bow, the lute crossbows are designed to make a note on the lute instead of making a firing noise, they play a note on the lute.


Natural Abilities: The Lute X-bows are used for close range encounters. Due to this fact, the strength of each shot is more powerful then other bow shots but are limit to 15 feet in range. These arrows can break through defenses up to B-rank.
Powered Abilities: N/A
History:
Malice obtained the mystics bow when he was about to leave his home island to train in a ninja village. His Father got it from a trunk in the attic and gave it to Malice as a parting gift. It’s origin is unknown.


Name: Mystics Bow
Quantity: One
Rank: C
Physical Description: The mystics bow is an old bow that is made of an unknown material that has the strength of iridium and is a mystic blue shade. It is roughly 5 feet tall and has a strong draw string. There are unknown carvings all along it that seem to be a legacy of some kind.
Natural Abilities: The Mystics bow can be split in half to make two simple katars.
Powered Abilities: N/A
History:
Malice obtained the mystics bow when he was about to leave his home island to train in a ninja village. His Father got it from a trunk in the attic and gave it to Malice as a parting gift. It’s origin is unknown.



Name: Mystics Arrows
Quantity: 20 per quiver, two quivers per battle.
Rank: C
Physical Description: The mystics arrows are heavy duty arrows that are made of the same unknown material the bow is made of. Each arrow is about two feet long and are wider then most arrows. The arrow heads are barbed in order to be able to stick into targets and stay.
Natural Abilities: The Mystics arrows head are made to stick into the opponent and be difficult to remove.
Powered Abilities: N/A
History:
Malice obtained the mystics arrows when he was about to leave his home island to train in a ninja village. His Father got them from a trunk in the attic and gave it to Malice as a parting gift. Their origin is unknown.

Name: Arrows of Silence
Quantity: 15 per quiver, one quiver per battle.
Rank: C
Physical Description: The arrows of silence are light arrows made to be silent and quick. These arrows are extremely fast and make little to no noise as they are fired. They are hollow so that if they exploded, shrapnel would fly everywhere.
Natural Abilities: The Arrows of Silence are hollow.
Powered Abilities: N/A
History:
During his academy days, Malice dabbled in crafting and started to craft some of his own arrows. The arrows he crafted were much lighter and smaller then his Fathers arrows. Decided that he would sometimes need these arrows, he put them in quivers and carried them around with him


Name: Mystics Rod
Quantity: 1
Rank: D
Physical Description: A battle staff
Natural Abilities: N/A
Powered Abilities: N/A
History:
Malice obtained the mystics rod when he was about to leave his home island to train in a ninja village. His Father got it from a trunk in the attic and gave it to Malice as a parting gift. Its origin is unknown.



History:


Pre-Academy Arc:

Malice was a normal child that lived with a normal family most of his life on a private island off the coast of Moon Country. When he turned 5 however, his life changed greatly. Once day he was playing his lute in a tree when he felt a strange wave of power come over him. Closing his eyes, he started to visualize something, a small sand worm. After that day, he had many conversations with the worm in his mind, he saw it as his best friend. The worm would always know what he was thinking and how he felt, and after feeling it, he would help him overcome it. As he was eating dinner one day, he had another vision of his worm and traveled to his mind to converse with it. Though he didn’t know, Malice was speaking out loud as he talked to his imaginary friend.

That was the day Malice found out that he wasn’t exactly part of the family. After long era of lies, his parents told him that they weren’t his genetic parents and that he had been found on the island when they came. Malice was shocked, but not angry and comforted his parents with his music. As he was playing lute, his mouth opened and a strange cloud of chakra flew out. The cloud landed on the ground and started to manifest its self into a form. The form was Malice’s imaginary friend, the sand worm he had seen in his mind. The meeting was strange, especially when they found that it could talk to Malice through tones it made.

Malice’s parents weren’t made or shocked, they were just happy. Happy that their son had such strength. Going to the attic, Malice’s father brought an old wooden chest to give to his son. Malice opened it and found a blue tunic outfit, a blue metal bow, blue metal arrows, and a crystal staff. Malice was ecstatic and changed into the clothes with great haste. When he came back to his parents, he noticed that they had sent a messenger hawk out with a letter. “ What’s that for?” Malice asked with a puzzled look on his face. “ We’re sending you to a ninja village so you can train your skills with other skilled children. Be sure to visit us though…” Malice’s mother said with a sad look on her face. Malice’s happy attitude comforted his parents and a week later, he was sent to the Village Hidden in the Grass for his new ninja life.

Academy Student Arc:

When Malice first came to the Grass village, he was scared and at the same time curious about ninja ways and techniques. After years of living in the village with his foster parents, he was ready to enter the academy for his training. As soon as Malice stepped into the academy, a weird feeling overcame him as he pet his sand worm in his hands. He had finally found a name for the creature. He would be called Pang, after his ability to utilize vibrations and track opponents.

Malice’s days in the academy would be called horrible in another persons eyes, but to Malice, it was perfect. His positive attitude and optimism helped him through the toughest times of his life with joy in his heart. When he felt alone he would just talk to Pang and play a tune on his lute. Malice wasn’t the best in the academy, but he was renown for his skills in camouflage and archery. Whenever they’d play hide and seek, Malice would always win with his superior stealth skills.

In throwing weapon classes, Malice was always on top. Every time he got into a fight he would hum a jolly tune and his body would dance with nature.

Genin Arc:

When Malice graduate the academy he felt weird. He wasn’t super happy about not going to school everyday, but he wasn’t really mad about it. He really wasn’t liking the change in his life, but he accepted it like he did anything else. Now he was a 13 year old pre teen that was soon to be put into a squad…


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PostSubject: Re: Malice Ongaku (Luna Bard) (APPROVED:X)   Wed Nov 04, 2009 6:58 pm

Done and done. Ready to be checked :3 Now ya'll need to hurry up.
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PostSubject: Re: Malice Ongaku (Luna Bard) (APPROVED:X)   Sun Nov 08, 2009 2:27 pm

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Name: Sound Camouflage
Rank: C
Type:N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This is a passive ability that camouflages the user’s sound by spreading it out in every direction. For example, if the user sang a note, the note would seem to be coming from every direction. Making it impossible to track.

This attack, due to the fact that it makes tracking nearly impossible is more than C-Ranked. I'd considered it a B. However, if you can tone it down, then I will approve it.

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Name: Arrows of Silence
Quantity: 10 per quiver, two quivers per battle.
Rank: C
Physical Description: The arrows of silence are light arrows made to be silent and quick. These arrows are extremely fast and make little to no noise as they are fired. They are hollow so that if they exploded, shrapnel would fly everywhere.
Natural Abilities: The Arrows of Silence are hollow.
Powered Abilities: N/A
History:
During his academy days, Malice dabbled in crafting and started to craft some of his own arrows. The arrows he crafted were much lighter and smaller then his Fathers arrows. Decided that he would sometimes need these arrows, he put them in quivers and carried them around with him

The arrows are a very good idea, but due to the fact that you are only genin, can we limit the amount used to 15? 20 for a genin considering the arrows is too powerful.

I'd like more detail on the overview of your personality, please.

I like the use of Grass specialties. :)
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PostSubject: Re: Malice Ongaku (Luna Bard) (APPROVED:X)   Sun Nov 08, 2009 5:37 pm

fix'd --D

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PostSubject: Re: Malice Ongaku (Luna Bard) (APPROVED:X)   Sun Nov 08, 2009 5:39 pm

Thanks, Darling! AH-PROVED!
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