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 Rain Shinobi [Completed For Approval]

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PostSubject: Rain Shinobi [Completed For Approval]   Tue Dec 15, 2009 8:38 pm

Basic Information:

Name: Lamalu "Gawjo" Kaguya
Nickname: Gawjo
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Clan: Kaguya

Appearance:




Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Brown
Distinguishing Features: Two identical round red circles on center of his back and A large noticeable Afro

Common Outfit: Charcoal Black Coat. Baby Blue Scarf. Full White T-Shirt. Sagging Black Denim Jeans. All Black High Top Kicks. Priceless Small White Diamond Earring. [left ear]

Professional Outfit: Regular Plain White T. Black with White Stripped Baggy Sweat Pants. Dark Gray Sandals.

Specific Articles: n/a


Overview: Lamalu as a swagger , cocky attitude.He feels that world is all against him.Lamalu knows that he must work for what he wants and needs, since things aren't just granted towards him.On the other hand Lamalu may seen from a perspective's eye a troublesome child but, once you get to know him, he's a down to earth fellow.Lamalu is a very intelligent young man but, gets side track from the negative.He as another side in which he may think of another human beings life before his own delicate life.Relationship wise Lamalu is a hit and quit sorta guy.He feels this way since he believes he might get hurt morally from the one he loves.Always looking for that special someone in his timeless life.Overall Lamalu is pretty much a ball of different aspects and personalities in which he views the world.

Likes:
*Hot Chicks
*Understandable People
*Peace and Quiet
*Showing Off
*Tasty Foods
*New Opportunities
*Comedy
*Friendship

Dislikes:
*Annoying People
*Arrogance
*Selfish Attitudes
*Rudeness
*Awkward Situations
*Fake Personalities and People
*Lying

Philosophy: Brush The Past Away and Look For a Better Day. Lamalu views the world as a unbalanced system. But one day Lamalu sees the world destroying their conflicts and grudges and working together to accomplish better things. Lamalu always would want to leave his days on the world with a great satisfaction of what he accomplished.

Nindo: "Do It, Just To Do It"
Friends: [None]
Enemies/Rivals: [None]

Clan Details:

Name: Kaguya
Village: Mist
Special Traits:

Bone Regrowth:
All Kaguya are able to regrow any removed, damaged, or broken bones in their body within seconds. They are not hindered in any way by jutsu that work on destroying their bones, since they simply regenerate. This enables them to use a majority of their jutsu.

Pain Tolerance:
Kaguya are fully susceptible to pain, but since their natural abilities cause them great pain, they become accustomed to it as they grow as ninja. Kaguya are able to ignore any pain caused by their own clan jutsu, though they are not immune to pain caused by other jutsu or effects.

Steel Bones:
All Kaguya bones are a tough as steel, making them much stronger than normal bones and thus, more effective when used in jutsu and also more resistant to breaking and damage. Jutsu that would normally damage bones are not effective against Kaguya bones unless they are of incredible strength that could logically harm steel.

Kekkei Genkai: Bone Corpse Pathway
Secret Clan Jutsu:

Name: Finger Bullets
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Element: None
Description: A Kaguya, using their bloodline abilities, will use their fingers to fire their distal phalange bones as bullets. As the bones fly through the air, they will rotate and drill into their target once they make contact.

Name: Bone Spikes
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Element: None
Description: A Kaguya, using their bloodline abilities, is able to alter their bone structure in order to produce bones with a sharp edge. These can be pushed out of the body from various points to make a defensive structure, or to make bladed bone weapons.

History: Shikotsu Myaku is the blood inheritance limit of the Kaguya Clan. The Kaguya clan hailed from the Water Country and they were known for their love of battle. They foolishly decided to challenge their home country and they were all wiped out save for Kimimaro. This clan has the ability to manipulate their bone structure. They can remove their bones at will to create weapons as strong as steel and also use their ability to spurn the creation of new bones.

Clan Symbol:

Rank Information:

Rank: Genin
Village: - Formerly In Mist Country - Resides In Rain Country
Squad: [None]

Special Information:

Strengths: Cracking Safety Locks , Quick Thinker, Ability Of Annoyance, Stay Clam In Stressed Situations
Weaknesses: Long Periods Of Concentrating, Getting Up On Time, Fallowing Directions, Studying Paper Work, Easily Ticked Off
Elemental Affinities: Suiton
Special Characteristics: n/a
Specialties: Ninjutsu and Genjutsu

Jutsu:

Basic Fundamental Jutsus
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Suiton
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Genjutsu
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Martial Styles:

N/A

Weaponry:

Weapon Case Stores:

25x Senbon
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25x Shurikens
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15x Kunais
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10x Exploding Notes
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Standard Wire
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Mirror
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Official Village Headband
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Pre-Academy Arc:

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Academy Student Arc:

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Role-Playing Demonstration:

The blade flashed through the air as it threatened to cleave him into two. I'm going to die soon if I keep this up! He's barely missing me! He jumped ready to prepare another jutsu but the masked man was on him in moments. Swing his deadly axe trying to end this fight quickly. Kazura ducked as the blade swept through the air past his hair. And there he saw an opening. He swung his foot low and caught the assassin in the legs. The man fell to floor as his legs were swept from under him. Wasting no time at all, he pulled a Kunai from his pouch and jumped into the air determined to become the winner, with his Kunai held high for the kill. The man was not finished to Naga's great dismay.

The assassin rolled away as Naga impaled the ground. The man swung his axe towards Naga's face. The man was like 5 feet away but the blade of the axe grazed his face cutting along his cheek. Naga Kazura cursed as he jumped back. The flipped off the ground and smirked.

"I'm going to kill you!" Naga spat as he began a series of hand-signs and shouted, "Suiton, Mizurappa (Water Release, Violent Water Wave)." Naga held his right hand up to his mouth. Suddenly a jet of water erupted from his mouth and skyrocketed towards an unsuspecting assassin. The blast hit him full in the chest where it sent him reeling backwards 6 yards. The blast should of knocked him senseless. But it seemed that he had much charisma of some sort. "Damn assassins. Where do you guys come from these days." Naga walked up to the man who was struggling to get back up. The Kazura whacked him on the side of the temple where he was knocked unconscious. "Time to take you to the police squad.


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PostSubject: Re: Rain Shinobi [Completed For Approval]   Wed Dec 16, 2009 11:16 pm

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Name: Dance of the Clematis Vine (Tessenka no Mai Tsuru)
Rank:B (will only use later until improve in rank)
Type:Kekkei Genkai and (Taijutsu)
Element:Hone
Chakra Cost:10
Description:The Kaguya Clan using their kekkei genkai, they can can modify and pull out his own spinal column to use as a flexible chain staff, regrowing a new spine to replace the removed one. The protrusions on the vertebra are modified to make them stronger and sharper

Name: Dance of the Seedling Fern (Sawarabi no Mai)
Rank:S (will only use later until improve in rank)
Type:Kekkei Genkai and (Ninjutsu)
Element:Hone
Chakra Cost:22
Description:The Kaguya Clan's final dance (presumably the strongest as a last resort), this jutsu causes a giant forest of bone spikes to burst from the ground.The user is able to emerge from any bone at will, giving him a deadly element of surprise should the opponent be able to avoid the attack.
'Cause you can't use these yet, just remove them and train them at a later date.

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Elemental Affinities: Suiton and Fūton
Genin can only have one element. Remove one of these and the techniques of the removed element.

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Name: Chakra Kenpa no Ame - Chakra Detecting Rain
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: This Ninjutsu technique allows the user to blanket a wide area with a downpour of rain. They can maintain a connection to the rain and tell when someone is obstructing it, making it an excellent location technique. The user can even detect the individual’s chakra level and skill.
If you choose to keep Suiton element, this is an A-rank technique and will have to be removed whichever element you choose.

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Name: Kazekiri - Wind Cutter
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Futon
Description: This technique is used to divide and neutralize a Wind attack launched against the user. Using their ability to manipulate Wind, the user will split the incoming Wind attack and make it harmless. Can attempt to dispel any wind attack regardless of rank.
If you choose to keep Fuuton element, this will need edits. At C-rank, this should only dispel Fuuton techniques of C-rank or below.

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PostSubject: Re: Rain Shinobi [Completed For Approval]   Wed Dec 16, 2009 11:39 pm

Ok Done and Done.
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PostSubject: Re: Rain Shinobi [Completed For Approval]   Wed Dec 16, 2009 11:44 pm

Just remove Fuuton from your elemental affinities and you're good to go.

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PostSubject: Re: Rain Shinobi [Completed For Approval]   Wed Dec 16, 2009 11:47 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Rain Shinobi [Completed For Approval]   Wed Dec 16, 2009 11:50 pm

Hold up. Your jutsu are in an incorrect format, and we have Canon Clan information provided here on the site that you are to use when you are using Canon Clans for your character.

http://narutonexus.forumotion.net/canon-clans-f22/kaguya-clan-kimimaru-t55.htm

Edit according to the provided information.

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PostSubject: Re: Rain Shinobi [Completed For Approval]   Wed Dec 16, 2009 11:54 pm

Oh hello, didn't see that there. Apologies Hage, still making the transition between Ingoo rules and these. Yeah, J, you'll need to do what he asks.

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PostSubject: Re: Rain Shinobi [Completed For Approval]   Thu Dec 17, 2009 12:04 am

Did I Do It Right?
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PostSubject: Re: Rain Shinobi [Completed For Approval]   Sat Dec 19, 2009 12:49 pm

Stamina and Chakra Control would be Special Characteristics, strengths are things that arent directly influential to combat ability, like being good at drawing or having a natural talent to write things down quickly.

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PostSubject: Re: Rain Shinobi [Completed For Approval]   Sat Dec 19, 2009 9:09 pm

Ok is that all?
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PostSubject: Re: Rain Shinobi [Completed For Approval]   Sat Dec 19, 2009 11:15 pm

Yes, though you will need to explain how you excellent stamina, why, and define it in a solid paragraph.

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PostSubject: Re: Rain Shinobi [Completed For Approval]   Sun Dec 20, 2009 12:09 am

I'll Just Remove It.
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PostSubject: Re: Rain Shinobi [Completed For Approval]   Sun Dec 20, 2009 5:36 pm

You describe your clothing, but not your actual character, you may either provide a picture of some sort for the site or you should provide a physical description.

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PostSubject: Re: Rain Shinobi [Completed For Approval]   Sun Dec 20, 2009 7:16 pm

Ok...makes sense.
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PostSubject: Re: Rain Shinobi [Completed For Approval]   Sun Dec 20, 2009 8:33 pm

Alright, looks fine, approved.

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