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Name: Telemachus Ongaku
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PostSubject: Telemachus Oni Onkagu (Done)   Sun Dec 06, 2009 1:23 pm

Basic Information:


Name: Telemachus Oni Ongaku
Nickname: ~
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Clan: Oni Ongaku

Appearance:


Hair Color: Red
Eye Color: Hazel
Distinguishing Features: Pale skin, Very skinny, Many tattoos
Common Outfit: Telemachus does not have a common outfit, as any person who only wears the same thing over and over is probably a dirty person. Telemachus in general will just wear a shirt and skinny pants to match his skinny build. On occasion, when the weather demands it, Telemachus will put on a jacket, and maybe a hat to cover his tiny head. Telemachus does not use his glasses regularly, only when he needs to read anything. Telemachus does not like to wear sandals, preferring to go either barefoot or in boots.
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Professional Outfit: When Telemachus is out on a mission, he will always dress according to the mission. If he is sent somewhere hot, he will wear shorts and a shirt, preferably light colors. If it is cold, he will bundle up and wear clothing that will keep him warm. He often carries a backpack to keep his things in, and has a carrying case for his ukulele. Other than that, he will wear whatever he needs specific for the mission, like a little black suit to keep him hidden for stealth.
Specific Articles: Large Earrings, Ukulele

Personality:


Overview: Telemachus is in general a nice person. He likes it when things go your way, and he likes it when things go his way. Much of a pacifist, Telemachus does not have much of a temper, and dislikes battle, if it can be avoided. Telemachus likes women, and loves to spend time with them. He also loves to help other people. He will go out of his way to help somebody, unless of course what they are doing is morally wrong, then he will ask them to stop politely.

Telemachus has struggled with many things over his lifetime, some of which include Dyslexia and many eating disorders. Telemachus has severe Dyslexia, and it takes him a long time to read, combined with glasses, makes reading one of his largest handicaps. But just because he can hardly read doesn't make him stupid, it just makes him average smart, learning what he can verbally.

Like above mentioned, Telemachus has had multiple eating disorders. This has made him very skinny, but has also hurt his health. Currently, he is not belemic or anorexic, but he is a vegetarian, which means he will not take any meat products in. Not just because he dislikes the flavor, but because meat is murder, and animals have souls too.
Likes:
~ Music
~Ukulele
~Women
~Tea
~Talking
~Running

Dislikes:
~Fighting
~Close Combat
~Cold Weather
~Jerks
~Dancing
~Reading
~Meat

Philosophy: Telemachus, like above mentioned, is against fighting, and will often try to solve problems with peace and/or compromise. But when confronted with a fight, Telemachus will follow through the fight, but trying to cause as little casualty as possible, using defensive techniques and genjutsu on enemy.
Nindo: "Always go right..."
Friends: ~
Enemies/Rivals: ~

Clan Details:


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Rank Information:


Rank: Genin
Village: Grass
Squad: ~

Special Information:


Strengths:
~Genjutsu
~Ukulele
~Speed
~Stamina
~Charismatic

Weaknesses:
~Taijutsu
~Weaponry
~Fighting close range in general
~Fast Enemies

Elemental Affinities: Wind, Water
Special Characteristics:

Stamina/Speed:
While not being fast in general, Telemachus does have the stamina to run farther than most people. This being said, he can run generally faster than most people for longer. This is due to the time he spent running. Sadly, this does not carry over to his strength, in fact, he is weaker than most people his rank.

Musically Gifted:
Having been taught how to play multiple instruments in his youth, Telemachus has developed an affinity for tempo, notes, and other music based factors. This being said, he can easily detect something with his hearing alone, and can often tell the difference between things based on their sound. This is also allows him to play music at a much better rate, making it easy to learn new instruments. This is not a hearing increase, as he is just better at picking out certain sounds.

Specialties:
Genjutsu
Ninjutsu

History:


Pre-Academy Arc: Telemachus was born into the Rain country by his father, Oryssyeos and his mother, Penelope. They were both very good looking people, and they were also both very talented ninja. Telemachus' father was a member of the Oni Onkagu clan, and as such, was very talented at playing the violin. Using those skills, he got Telemachus' mother to court with him, and they soon married and had a child.

The child was born, and he was named Telemachus. His parents rejoiced, and they began to raise him to his father's expectations, which revolved around music and physical activity. He quickly learned to play ukulele, as it was his instrument of choice, and his father began to tell him stories of creatures, creatures bound to their world, and that a few of them could be commanded by him.

Telemachus learned quickly from his Oryssyeos how to summon a demon, and the one he summoned was a small scorpion creature known as Scylla. Scylla was somewhat tough to control, but Telemachus got the hang of it easily. Soon after, his father took him into the academy, where he would learn about how to be a ninja.

Academy Student Arc: Telemachus joined the academy, and he found that he disliked most combat. It was fun when they were playing, but he didn't like it much when somebody got hurt. By this time, he was 10, and also by this time, he had become self conscious about his weight.

While he was not fat, he felt that way, and so as such, he lacked eating anything, making it almost impossible for him to do ninja stuff for the academy. Because of theses problems he faced, Telemachus failed to pass the academy for the first time. His father asked him about this, and when he realized what was going on, became furious.

Forcing Telemachus to eat, Telemachus became very un-happy. But, in due time, he became a better ninja, and when he finally had passed the exams, Telemachus no longer had eating disorders, though he has refused to eat meat, has become a very good ukulele player, and has shown interest in genjutsu.

Genin Arc: After passing the academy, Telemachus was praised by his father and mother, who both decided to buy him presents, unknowingly giving him the exact same ukulele twice. A beautiful time, Telemachus now waits for a sensei.

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PostSubject: Re: Telemachus Oni Onkagu (Done)   Sun Dec 06, 2009 2:08 pm

Jutsu:


No-Element Jutsu:

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.

Name: Henge no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu allows the user to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu. The transformation jutsu is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally maintaining the form. On top of that, the user would be, most likely, interacting with the environment. This puts much mental strain on the inexperienced ninja.

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This technique creates intangible copies of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. The illusions can be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement (won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc.).

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy, this jutsu allows a ninja to free themselves if they have been tied up.

Name: Genjutsu Kai
Rank: E-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu
Rank: D-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily boost the user's reflexes. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance between the user and their intended destination.

Owner: Hageshii Ame
Name: Laughter of Loki
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: The user causes their voice to rebound off every available surface in an enclosed area, making it difficult to locate the location of the voice. This jutsu does not function in an area that is open.

Owner: Hageshii Ame
Name: Eye Attraction Jutsu
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A very simple jutsu that aids in Genjustu, a ninja will use a small spark of chakra to go into a small pellet that will burst in a colorful and see through smoke. The eyes of a viewer, regardless of their will, will be drawn towards the explosion as it is specially created to make it nearly impossible not to be drawn towards (exceptions would be blindness, color blindness, etc.) This is used to trap an opponent in Genjutsu, since this makes a ninja meet their own eyes, though other uses exist.

Doton(Earth):

Name: Dochuu Senkou - Underground Submarine Voyage
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Doton
Description: Doton • Dochuu Senkou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After forming the needed hand seals, a ninja can sink below ground and quickly travel through the earth, extending a weapon or hand above the earth to appear as a shark or submarine fin.

Name: Retsudo Tenshou - Revolving Split Earth Palm
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Doton
Description: Doton • Retsudo Tenshou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. When the ninja forms the needed handseals and slams their palm to the ground, surrounding rock will begin to churn and twist up crushing all those trapped within it.

Name: Moguragakure no Jutsu - Mole Hiding Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Doton
Description: Doton • Moguragakure no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This technique allows the ninja to burrow into the ground and hide out of sight. This allows them to avoid attack or travel underground.

Name: Doro Gaeshi - Mud Overturn
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Doton
Description: Doton • Doro Gaeshi is a defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After striking the ground with their hands, a large wall of earth will rise into place as defense. The defense is not perfect though, a hard or drilling impact can puncture the wall.

Owner: Hageshii Ame
Name: Earth Style, Ghost Walking Jutsu
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: By using the subjects Earth elemental affinity the user is able to cover up any tracks or markings made in the earth by the user’s passing. Other elements, however, are unaffected such as smell. This jutsu does not function over water or over worked stone, only natural earthen materials.

Owner: Hageshii Ame
Name: Earth Style, Earth Wave Jutsu
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: The user touches the ground and sends a sudden burst of a large amount of chakra into it. This causes the ground to send out a wave from the initial point and knock over or disorient opponents.

Owner: Hageshii Ame
Name: Earth Style, Earth Pillars Jutsu
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: An earth chakra using ninja strikes the ground and causes three large pillars to rise in front of him, each three to four feet tall. Although this could stop an attacking opponent, this jutsu has another purpose.
Closer inspection reveals that the pillars are separated into twelve pieces each. The ninja who created the pillars then sweeps his hand around in a circular sweeping motion and strikes the top portion of each pillar, sending it flying off towards an opponent. This is repeated twelve times before the pillar is expended, not necessarily successively.

Owner: Hageshii Ame
Name: Earth Style, Ant Lion’s Funnel
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: A ninja strikes the earth and causes it to rapidly change into a funnel similar to an ant lion’s with the user at the bottom. The sides of the tunnel are made of loose earth, making escape difficult without aid or chakra. The size of the funnel is based on the chakra used to perform this technique, ranging from a few feet, to nearly 20ft. at it’s widest point.

Owner: Hageshii Ame
Name: Earth Style, Mud Bubbles
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: A ninja spits out bubbles made of mud filled with chakra. Upon impact, the bubbles burst and the chakra explodes out, damaging whatever it hits. The bubbles can be created in the mouth without any external materials.

Genjutsu:

Name: Kokohi no Jutsu – False Place Technique
Rank: D
Type: Genjutsu
Duration: Until Kai is used, or the person realizes they’re under the Genjutsu.
Description: Kokohi no Jutsu is a simple Genjutsu technique which changes the appearance of a nearby object.

Name: Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu - Demonic Illusion • Hell Viewing Technique
Rank: D
Type: Genjutsu
Duration: Until Kai is used, or the person realizes they’re under the Genjutsu.
Description: Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that causes its target to see a horrifying vision. The ninja will use the serpent hand seal to cause a circle of leaves to spin and envelop the target and then fall away. Once cast the world will appear normal to the target until they see the illusion.

Name: Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu - Sly Mind Affect Technique
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Duration: Until Kai is used.
Description: Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique which causes the target to travel around in circles. If the ninja is unable to detect the illusion very quickly, they can become exhausted mentally and physically when they are unable to reach their desired target by traveling along the same path over and over.

Name: Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu - Mist Servant Technique
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Duration: Until Kai is used.
Description: Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that creates false attackers to delay and confuse the enemy. Though these servants are not real, the actual ninja is able to remain hidden and throw kunai and shuriken matching the movements of the servants. This makes it appear the false servants are capable of attacking. When the enemy attempts to attack the servant, they will merely disrupt the servants illusion body but not destroy it.

Owner: Hageshii Ame
Name: Genjutsu Speaking Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Using Genjutsu on a willing target, a ninja is able to convey thoughts, feelings, descriptions, etc. in a mere second what would take normal ninja minutes or hours to convey. Despite it’s rank, ninja who do not have Genjutsu as a Sub or Main cannot use this jutsu, as it requires intimate knowledge of Genjutsu.

Owner: Hageshii Ame
Name: Genjutsu Drawing Insult
Rank: D
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Using Genjutsu a ninja will make an insult at an opponent, usually involving their eyes, and draw a ninja’s attention towards his/her eyes, at which point a Genjutsu of choice will activate. This typically involves a rude gesture or remark.

Owner: Hageshii Ame
Name: Infinite Horizon
Rank: D
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A very simple Genjutsu that relies on making the ninja think they’re moving their bodies, when in reality they are not. This is often used with other Genjustu in order to confuse the opponent, even if they should break the illusion.

Owner: Hageshii Ame
Name: Demonic Form
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A Genjutsu technique that is used via eye contact with a target. Once contact is made, the opponent thinks that the user has a demon’s face, with two large curling horns, numerous fangs, and dark black eyes. This jutsu continues further, the target sees the user’s flesh begin to peel away and reveal demon flesh underneath it. This occurs over a course of five posts as the user appears more and more demonic until they look like a full demon. Ninja who are not used to demons or the undead are paralyzed with fear for 1 post upon this jutsu’s use.

Owner: Hageshii Ame
Name: Illusionary Imitation
Rank: C-S
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A jutsu used to imitate any form of Ninjutsu that a ninja knows, has seen, or knows enough about to imitate. This is done via Genjutsu that resembles the desired ninjutsu, though creative liberties can be taken to make the jutsu seem more impressive, frightening, damaging, etc. (ex. Making Endan appear to be a giant dragon head.) This Genjustu causes the damage dealt in the illusion to seem very real, and can confuse a ninja who sees the user using jutsu that would normally not be possible.

Name: Scylla
Gender: None
Age: 14
Appearance: Scylla is a three and a half foot long scorpion (Minus Tail), that is the Oni demon for Telemachus. It has a two and a half long foot tail, with large pincers for hands. It does not have any feet, being capable of moving without them. It has brown chakra emanating around it.
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Personality: Being a chakra demon created only to serve, Scylla has no emotions.
Rank: C
Natural Abilities: Scylla is a very powerful creature for being so small. It has pincers that are capable of cutting flesh with ease. Its stinger is laced with a poison that if comes in contact with another being's chakra, will corrupt it, making it tougher to use chakra for an hour.
Special Abilities:

Owner: Hageshii Ame
Name: Earth Style, Ghost Walking Jutsu
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: By using the subjects Earth elemental affinity the user is able to cover up any tracks or markings made in the earth by the user’s passing. Other elements, however, are unaffected such as smell. This jutsu does not function over water or over worked stone, only natural earthen materials.

Name: Moguragakure no Jutsu - Mole Hiding Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Doton
Description: Doton • Moguragakure no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This technique allows the ninja to burrow into the ground and hide out of sight. This allows them to avoid attack or travel underground.

Name: Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu - Mist Servant Technique
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Duration: Until Kai is used.
Description: Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that creates false attackers to delay and confuse the enemy. Though these servants are not real, the actual ninja is able to remain hidden and throw kunai and shuriken matching the movements of the servants. This makes it appear the false servants are capable of attacking. When the enemy attempts to attack the servant, they will merely disrupt the servants illusion body but not destroy it

Story: When Telemachus was born, Scylla was born as well. Scylla is the chakra demon that mirrors Telemachus' existence, and therefor is the chakra demon the Telemachus uses in combat. Scylla will grow in power as Telemachus does, quite like a normal summoning.
Slot: Is the Chakra Demon that Oni Onkagu clan allows.

Weaponry:

50xSenbon
1xForehead Protector
1xMirror
5xKunai
10xShruiken
10 Feet of Wife

Name: Ukulele
Quantity: 3 (One is carried at all times)
Rank: E
Physical Description: Made out of simple wood, this ukulele is simple to play and is very lightweight, making it easy to break.
Natural Abilities: Has beautiful quality noise.
Powered Abilities: ~
History: These ukuleles were bought when Telemachus decided that he wanted to learn ukulele. after practicing for three years, he became quite talented at it.
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